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July 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
So far, this is an excellent story. I love it. You have done an excellent job portraying Cal's vulnerability and Michael's protectiveness. I look forward to them growing together.
I saw (I think) that English is not your first language. I'm glad you got a beta, but I did notice that there are still a few issues. They don't detract too much from the story. If it would help get more of the story, I would be willing to beta for grammar/spelling, if you like. :)
Hope you enjoy the plot bunny chow.
Analah
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December 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please say you did not forget this story!!!! Hope more is still to come... No pun intended!
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November 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please keep going. I can't wait to see how it ends.
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July 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
please update
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February 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you hae not left this story!! Been looking at this story for so long... I hope a new chapter comes through soon!!
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December 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please, Please, PLEASE don't abandon this!!!
It's really good.
It's really good.
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December 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love it! *pokes your plot bunnies* Looking forward to the next chapter :)
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September 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story yesterday. I really like it. But you haven't updated in over a year!!! Are you going to finish this? Please do.
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September 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Always been a fan of vampire stories, and this is a good one so please continue and I will be waiting patiently.
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September 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
it's been a while. Hope you are not having a writer's block :) good luck!