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June 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg, this is such a good story! It's so funny; Carter is such a funny dude! lol
It's such a pleasure to read such a well-written story that is free from typos, punctuation (or lack of) errors, etc.
I can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
Great job!
It's such a pleasure to read such a well-written story that is free from typos, punctuation (or lack of) errors, etc.
I can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
Great job!
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June 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty fucking awesome. And I’m seriously jealous of your dialog. Carter is snarky and endearing all at the same time—the passion for clothes he can’t afford, giving his landlord the last of his tips for his cat! Ha. I’m really rooting for him to get ‘unstuck’ in life ya know?
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June 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
your OC is hilarious. XD
I enjoyed reading stuff from his perspective
I enjoyed reading stuff from his perspective
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June 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far!! Hopefully this will last more than a few chapters this time :)