rate_review Reviews

Ooo porn! Liking the story! ;)

Got to say it's very interesting and amusing.

I have a secret love for porn star fictions, and they aren't as common as others. So when I saw this I was really excited! I love Carter, he's so darn adorable... Daz is also one of my favorites...I can just picture him in my head so clearly, lol! I wonder what this Ryan Wilde will be like? He sounds sexy, but also like he could be an asshole... Hehe, I can't wait for the next update (as usual I'm impatient!) so, please update soon!!

Oh, this is very fun! I love your writing style--it's like ... well, it's too late to think of a witty analogy, so I'll say I love the speed, the wit, the intelligence, and just how very real Carter is. It's very fun to be in his head, seeing and hearing all that goes on there. I really hope you're able to update soon!

Carter is so adorably awkward :D
Great chapter! Very interested to see what else he gets up to, update soon

I wonder what his porn name will be? And I wonder how far he will take this endeavor?

Oh God, you are so fucking funny! I laughed througout the whole chapter! Omg, so many hysterical lines: My mom's going to kill me. My mom won't see this, will she? hahahah (let's hope not!) And ANAL LEAKAGE??? Omg, what is THAT?! Nevermind; I don't wanna know!

Oh, about 3/4 of the way down, there's a typo on Daz's name; it says Dav instead of Daz. Where he says to Carter, "Boy this is porno" and he goes into the sentence about popping his cherry on the screen, or something like that. Just thought I'd tell you if you wanted to change it from the "v" to the "z".

Anyway, awesome chapter! So funny! I can't wait for the next one! :)

I can't wait to see his life as a porn star! ;D
If he makes it, that is. Oho.

Oooo love the story so far. I am very much looking forward to the next chapter :D

Very good so far. There's a little problem with your tenses but interesting story and characters.