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for There Must Be Brighter Lights

by canweswapowls

schedule July 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I nearly creamed my pants. . .
I'll write a better review once my brain starts up again.
person bcsaturdai
schedule July 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just read chapters 4 and 5 and loved them both. I feel bad for Carter. He really likes his job and the sex, but he's surrounded by straight men making money in gay porn. Hopefully he gets partnered up with someone more his equal.
person Jem91175
schedule July 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so I expressed a very sincere hope for a new chapter soon last time I reviewed, and here I've got my wish. This has me thinking I must be on a winning streak, so I'm going to make a few more wishes: first, I would love to know who you picture Carter being "played" by--I loved seeing your idea of Ryan! Second, I would love another chapter (or five) very soon! And third, I would like to win the lottery. ;)
person Jem91175
schedule July 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Again, this is just so much fun! Hope you're able to update soon! :D
person Kate
schedule July 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story and look forward to your updates. Carter is a great character - very funny, he's a real dude to me already :)
person elegantenvy
schedule July 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Carter is hilariously awkward, love him to pieces. He doesn't really seem to know what he's gotten himself into though. Wonder if Ryan will thaw his icy bitch persona, not sure what to think about him yet.
Can't wait to read more, such an awesome story :D
schedule July 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh God this was funny! It seems Carter is getting funnier and funnier! I loved the rebuttal he gave Ryan, w/o knowing it was Ryan! Shit that was funny!

And do they really put a sponge up there when a girl has her period? I always wondered......hehehe

Hey, have a happy 4th, owl, if you celebrate it. Can't remember if you're from the states or not....
person POHness1
schedule July 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is fabulous! I can't wait to read what happens next. What if he gets booked in the movie? that would be kinda awesome! Either way, he seems to be doing well.
person Anon
schedule July 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i dont know if my sensibilities can handle this. lol. i look forward to the next chapter.
schedule July 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit; each chapter just gets funnier and funnier! His grin is almost sad at the edges. That might just be cum. Hysterical! Leo's twink cousin! Omg, what a sense of humor you have! :)

I see you fixed the Dav, Daz mix-up. I have one more: when Jules is starting to blow Carter, he licks from his naval, should be navel. Naval is like the naval academy, lol.

Anyway, can't wait for more! Awesomely wicked story! :)