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Oh god Charlie... That dick. Feel so bad for poor Marc, though I guess we all knew this was going to happen sooner or later, huh?

Anyway, great job so far! I love that you update so fast, it's super hard to find anything good to read nowadays. So thanks for this.

Wow,

I find this story really intense. I'm hoping to see the next chapter soon.

I really like your story. It has a very fitting title to it. This naive person is living in a fog-blinded. Also I like your writing style. It can be poetic.

I'm really glad you appreciated my comments...when I first read your story I was surprised there wasn't a single review, because it was really good and deserved more comments, so I thought I could at last leave a review and tell the author how much I liked their story! :)
The plot is very intriguing and nothing can be taken for granted: even when all seems clear ( Mark is the poor oblivious victim and Charlie is the sick bastard ) the characters are evolving and all can still happen! A possible redemption for Charlie or a lucky escape for Mark makes this story exciting and I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work! :)

I just read story for the first time and am sorry I didn't catch it sooner. I like it. Very well written and realistic. Poor Mark, I want to castrate Charlie for what he's doing. I hope he gets sent to jail and that Mark ends up with someone who loves and cares and protects him. Please don't let this be like a death fic or something (meaning Mark) I would be very upset. It's interesting reading the story from each of their POV's too and makes it chilling from Charlie's perspective.

Good job and I look forward to reading more but just hope it has happy ending for Mark.

So I really like this... Or where it's going. More please :)

Very beautiful story!Your characters are very real...poor Mark!I hope he will be rescued in the end :)