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by Bayokko1

schedule June 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
Just wanted to let you know that I'm following your story. I hope to see the rest on-line soon.
I'm looking forward to seeing how the relationship continues to form and how they solve the whole prejudice problem.

Yours,

Leoward
person Roachy64
schedule June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Still loving this story. Poor William, his life has been turned upside down and just when he gets a little happier he's knocked sideways. Bijorn has his work cut out for him if he wants Wills attitude to change.
person Roachy64
schedule June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh they've finally come to an understanding and got it together...sweet. William was so domineering in his anger wow! What I didn't get was the part that William would be killed if their relationship is discovered? Did I read that right cus if so then perhaps you could explain rule/law a bit more cus it came out of the blue. Apart from that it was another good update and once again I'm looking forward to the next.
person JeAnEttE
schedule June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
how sad that both Bjorn and William feel as if they did something wrong...even though William gave himself to Bjorn for his friend's wife to be found...but instead it made him feel dirty....and their relationship was slowly progressing.
person JeAnEttE
schedule June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aida was able to help Bjorn...and it was wonderful to see that Bjorn and William were able to admit that they like each other...that sure was some wonderful, well-written smex!! I can't wait to read more!
person JeAnEttE
schedule June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow...I really like Harald and his acceptance. But Gunnar creeps me out.
person JeAnEttE
schedule June 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story and the dynamic between William and Bjorn. So William thought that Bjorn just wanted him in his bed...but in fact William has to see that Bjorn has affections for him...can't wait to read more (I read this all in one go!)
person Merely Truth
schedule June 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
they are CUTE ! and William is very refreshing. I doubt Magnus will be very glad...
Thank you for your story !

French reader,
Bonjour de la France

Merely Truth
person kylee
schedule June 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love the new chapters. I keep thinking that William is going to get in trouble for being too free with his tongue. He almost did with Harald. I hope Bjorn will be able to make a little progress with William soon.
person RJaneyP
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What can I say, the Viking prince just can't resist the baker's sweet Buns! A lovely inspiring story I can't wait to read more. G