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January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I feel in love with the differences and also the maturity not in the (sex) kinda way but the way it was written and the variety of words. I'll be looking forward to reading your other work. -Your new fan FaithSins:D
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July 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story, with a happy ending. Squee!! And all of those possibly new stories seem very interesting, I look forward to more of your writing!
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July 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! The ending was wonderful! I'm glad to see a happy-ending for all (I'm a sucker for happy endings)...I loved Bjorn and William in the epilogue! I can't wait to see what you have in store for us!
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July 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm looking very forward to your other stories. They sound very interesting.
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July 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was a sweet love story. You did a good job in telling the story. I like the fact that you made you heroes "hefty" men. There are too many stories about lovers, heroes and such with perfect or near perfect abs or slim bodies. This added a nice element to the character definition, because you actually made the fat guys the love interest. Ingenious. It was a bold move and bravo to you for pulling it off. Good job, and I hope to read another of your stories soon. Take Care!
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July 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! Is Aida the person the king loved?!?! Plot twist!
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July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have been having trouble posting my reply...
Thanks for updating it made my day!
Yeah, I'm glad that everyone made it out safe...well at least alive...and Gunnar got what was coming to him - I liked how William helped Bjorn run him through with the sword...I also liked the part where Will threw himself on Magnus to keep him safe - Magnis finally sees! Aida and Magnus definitly have something going on!
Thanks for updating it made my day!
Yeah, I'm glad that everyone made it out safe...well at least alive...and Gunnar got what was coming to him - I liked how William helped Bjorn run him through with the sword...I also liked the part where Will threw himself on Magnus to keep him safe - Magnis finally sees! Aida and Magnus definitly have something going on!
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July 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow... a lot happened in this chapter! I hope that the King will be alright after Gunnar stabbed him...especaily now that he realizes what Bjorn and William share...I wonder if it was Aida that the King loved...or at least that is my guess. Keep up the good work!
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July 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can feel the climax coming!!! Can't wait!
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July 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liked how Rolf got along with William; and showed his support to Bjorn and William being together. I like Andrew - he may be a big oaf but I like his personality.