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July 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see an update on this story! It's fantastic how you weave the physical wants and the psychological intrigue (for lack of a better word) into each chapter.
Leo is not used to having any feelings beyond lust when he's with other boys, but Roethe brings out feelings of protectivness in Leo that he doesn't know how to handle. What's worse, he doesn't even trust his own instincts.
Excellent story, exellent chapter; I'm looking forward to the next one; hopefully it'll be out quicker????? hint,hint :)
Leo is not used to having any feelings beyond lust when he's with other boys, but Roethe brings out feelings of protectivness in Leo that he doesn't know how to handle. What's worse, he doesn't even trust his own instincts.
Excellent story, exellent chapter; I'm looking forward to the next one; hopefully it'll be out quicker????? hint,hint :)
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July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
roethe is so cute! Keep on writing :D
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June 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story so far! I just have one complaint: the chapters are too short! lol Instead of having four chapters, you should have combined chapters one and two and then three and four.
Other than that; it's a great story! It's extremely well-written, which is such a pleasure!
I'm looking forward to Leo finding out why Roethe stopped speaking.
Great job! :)
Other than that; it's a great story! It's extremely well-written, which is such a pleasure!
I'm looking forward to Leo finding out why Roethe stopped speaking.
Great job! :)