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for Project 009SAL

by VerbalVomit

person Althydia
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, was it a poacher? Or even an extremely intelligent Leon who wanted Ryan for himself?... I hope he can get out of this predicament, though. If he were with real lions, they would definitely think of him as easy prey being unconscious in the wilds. Let's hope they have enough human characteristics, or they have already eaten and are sated...
I really like the original idea for your story, and I'm looking forward to discovering how you'll develop it and what will happen to poor Ryan!
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a really interesting start andI can't wait for the next update!!!
person JJ
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love the story so far...such an original idea! It makes for some interesting reading. I liked how you explained everything. I wonder if Ryan is going to be alright...and I wonder whats in store for project Save A Life! Update soon, I'm already addicted!
person Kris
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooh I like this. What a great concept for a fic. Looking forward to more!
person kikib77
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh boy hope everything is okay in the end...
person Aleks
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great start and an evil cliffhanger :)
- I want more!
person mw0627
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Second attempt to review...darn AFF. Anyway I love this story and am excited for more. If it's poacher people tyring to steal cubs that shot at him hopefully a hot Leon will come to his rescue.
person Ovelkara
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
really cant wait to see what happens a very nice start hope to see an update soon ^_^
person Aisa
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like the start so keep it up!
person oo
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
weird. im curious.