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June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw poor thing, how he's gone and hurt himself. Black mane clearly needs to come find him, his screaming will make it easy.
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June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very nice and realistic start.
Added this to my WIP folder to follow.
Added this to my WIP folder to follow.
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June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really good! Would love to read some more. You are really good at roping me in. Can't wait until the leons find him.
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June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yummy. :3
. . . I mean, amazing! I really like how this story has started. I've been in the mood for a good animal/human story. (:
. . . I mean, amazing! I really like how this story has started. I've been in the mood for a good animal/human story. (:
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June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi I like your storie a lot. I like that you updated so fast keep it up. May any potchers that lay their hands on any cup burn in hell!!!!!! Love it so far and pleacee update again so fast.
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June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG xD Good job I can't wait til the good things start happening. xD Update soon please. =)
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June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awesome update still cant wait to see what happens next update soon ^_^
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June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
First of all...nice style. Easy to read, though not much substance yet, but that's alright for the beginning of a story.
Second...the plagiarism...a plot like this has been done countless times. Hybrids, a researcher/warden/master/younameit and a kind of a love story between the parties. While I don't know where you want to go with this yet, let me tell you, you're not the first to think of it and do it :) I don't want to put you down with this. As I said, I don't know where you'll take it, but I'll keep reading it.
Second...the plagiarism...a plot like this has been done countless times. Hybrids, a researcher/warden/master/younameit and a kind of a love story between the parties. While I don't know where you want to go with this yet, let me tell you, you're not the first to think of it and do it :) I don't want to put you down with this. As I said, I don't know where you'll take it, but I'll keep reading it.
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June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha - the snake and the screaming real mature :)
Poor guy....
Poor guy....
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June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
thanks for another head-spinning fast update! Black Mane and Ryan offically meet...I like Black Mane's thoughts they are amusing.
Also, I enjoy the notes at the end of the chapters...I'm learning a lot about Lions...
Also, I enjoy the notes at the end of the chapters...I'm learning a lot about Lions...