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This is a very interesting concept, and I think it has a lot of potential. I enjoyed you;re description of all the "leons" and how their all so geneticly different, which is a big change from all the stock standard "cat people' stories I've seen on this site in which people have ears and claws and little else. Your characters are all quite interesting and believable so far, especially Ryan who one very adorable scientist. However, there are a lot of errors in it which drag the whole story down, like when you write "steal cages" instead of "steel cages" and so on, so I'd highly recommend that you get a beta reader to help you fix these things or try joining a site like writerscrit.com where people can help you with this sort of thing, you really have nothing to be nervous about! Your writing has a lot of good qualities and it's obvious that you are trying very hard to write a good story, which is the best quality a writer can have in my opinion. I'm sure that everyone else can appreciate that too.

wow really good concept for a story i like it can twait for the next chapters

I like the storyline.. let's see where it leads ;)

Nah we don't care what they are wearing lol. Yay an update.

This chapter has left me with even more questions than before; I can't wait to see what will happen next, you've left it at an interesting point. I was really happy to see this updated, it's been a while. But as you said, one word sums it up: college. If you're in need of a beta I would like to offer my services. I'm not sure if you need qualifications but I am an English major in university. If you decide to take me up on my offer my email is writeaddict7@gmail.com

Over fifty reviews. You need to finish this story! I like it already!

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NO! such a short chapter, looking foreword to more!

Good beginning! I hope you continue this. I like Ryan and how he react to things.

Bye
M

I've been following your story since the beginning but this is my first time reviewing. I really enjoy your storytelling and the first encounter between the two is just sooo cute! I like your fast updates and hope you won't keep us wanting for too long.

Just some small mistakes: you used "it's" when it should be "its", as in and . "It's" is the short form for "it is".

Cheers!