rate_review Reviews

i'm loving the way you've brought all the characters together.
The mech doc is creepy as hell and his creations are scary.
I hope the hot head can get to his bro in time though.

Just a bit of heavy tech metal overload, liked the plot but I could use a little more physical discription of the brothers and other characters etc. The character motivations in the story are well done, but too much mecha leaves me rusty and horny for smut. I am very interested to see how you manage to fit it in, so to speak! G