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November 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Waaaah I love Vex. I keep loving all these characters but I do. He's up to something, and by the looks of it, it's something very very nice ^-^. He seems smart for a 'kid' as Ergo continuously called him, perverted as he is. Could it be the raging hormones? 8D... Who knows. But WAIT... what if it's not nice D:... what if he's working for Vorago and is trying to keep Ergo and Dhrele together because that creeper wants them to 'breed.' And he's only pretending to help and... stuff. I don't know. But I'll kick his ass. I will. I'll surgically insert myself into the BioRisk world and beat him to a bloody pulp.
I wonder who this guy is that Vex says wants to talk to Ergo. New character perhaps? :o... we shall see, we shall see. I'm just typing my undeveloped thoughts, not asking for spoilers or anything XD. We hates the spoilers.
That last bit with Ergo and Dhrele was adorable! This Mpreg thing is actually looking pretty cute... I mean, if I think about it, a baby Dhergo! I want one! I wonder how Dhreles give birth... -strokes beard.-
Anywaaaay, this chapter was great to find 8D... I was just poking around the interwebz before bed and VOILA! BioRisk update! WIN! Looking forward to the next as always~
I wonder who this guy is that Vex says wants to talk to Ergo. New character perhaps? :o... we shall see, we shall see. I'm just typing my undeveloped thoughts, not asking for spoilers or anything XD. We hates the spoilers.
That last bit with Ergo and Dhrele was adorable! This Mpreg thing is actually looking pretty cute... I mean, if I think about it, a baby Dhergo! I want one! I wonder how Dhreles give birth... -strokes beard.-
Anywaaaay, this chapter was great to find 8D... I was just poking around the interwebz before bed and VOILA! BioRisk update! WIN! Looking forward to the next as always~
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November 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhh, so Dhrele KNOWS that he could have a baby? Or is he just saying that if it was possible for him, he'd have one if it were Egro's? However, i wonder if Egro will tell Dhrele that that is what the "doctors/scientists" WANT is for them to have a baby....I find it cute how smitten Egro is even if he doesn't actually show it^^ And of course Dhrele is just as possessive and such with Egro, hahha^^ Great chapter!! Please update soon! I just don't think Dhrele actually knows what having a baby would do to himself....Though i bet he wouldn't care huh?
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November 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I just add you in FB and in live journal we are already friends! My ID overthere is kenshin77777! I am like a ghost over there! just come to read fan fictions and dl mangas and leave! :P but I am active in FB ;)
Anyway, thanks for the new chapter :D Nice as ever! and Vex is cute too! ^_^ I hope these new guys could give him some useful info that can help them flee as soon as possible! I just wondering: where??? Does X have a place in mind?! and if D got pregnant, how long his pregnancy would be?!
Ohhh, I think you have left us with more and more questions! ^_^
I just add you in FB and in live journal we are already friends! My ID overthere is kenshin77777! I am like a ghost over there! just come to read fan fictions and dl mangas and leave! :P but I am active in FB ;)
Anyway, thanks for the new chapter :D Nice as ever! and Vex is cute too! ^_^ I hope these new guys could give him some useful info that can help them flee as soon as possible! I just wondering: where??? Does X have a place in mind?! and if D got pregnant, how long his pregnancy would be?!
Ohhh, I think you have left us with more and more questions! ^_^
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November 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I feel like ergo is only slightly less in the dark as dhrele is. There is always something poping up that shows just how little he knows. Poor guy. Lol. Love this chapter. Ergo is kinda sweet but still cute that dhrele is carrying him around. Lol. Who will carry ergo around when dhrele becomes a beachball?
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November 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey, it's been a long time! ^_^ How have you been?!
I guess I get here late and didn't read the random facts all! but I did read all of your post exchanged with Lepidottero, here and in LJ. (BTW, do you have a FB account?!)
Back to random facts, well I guess you have to rely on the rankings more than reviews! Many people read but don't review even when they have enjoyed the story a lot! I. myself, do try to review each and every fic I read, which are a lot and you can just have a peak in my profile, but there are times I am really busy or sleepy or on the run, to sit down and review! That's why I just rate! and believe me only 20-30% of your readers even rate! Just take a look at how many times your story have been viewed! You can get a good idea how many people are following and are fans! There are a lot and I personally recommend and review this fic in my own forum and I guess you get 10-20 more reader just from there!
All I'm trying to say is you rock and this fiction is awsome! ^_^ and that we really appreciate the fact that you share it with us! Thankssss xoxo
and ohhhh you were talking about Fake and Viewfinder and Under Ground Hotel , ... I don't think there are anyone (well girls) out there that haven't read them or following them! I mean we are here for M/M and we all have read all the famous ones out there, either fictions, mangas, comics, Animes, ... lol It's just nice to know we all share the same taste! :P and Lepidottero recommendations ... well I have read some and I have to check out the rest too! ;) it was just so amazing that you two have this discussion! :D I enjoyed it as much as the fiction itself! :)
Anyway, this chapter was really something! It's been a while that I was thinking about cameras in D's cell and I wondering how come the white coats didn't same anything???!!! O.o Well, it was good to know that it was X's protecting E and D! :D
ommm, I just can't picture E as a father! :D he is soooo alpha male and picturing him taking care of a child is ... emmm impossible! :P well, that should be interesting!!! :D I really do like mpergs :D
Anyway, thanks again for the update and pleaaaaseeee update sooner ^_^ so many people looking forwards to see another update ;)
I guess I get here late and didn't read the random facts all! but I did read all of your post exchanged with Lepidottero, here and in LJ. (BTW, do you have a FB account?!)
Back to random facts, well I guess you have to rely on the rankings more than reviews! Many people read but don't review even when they have enjoyed the story a lot! I. myself, do try to review each and every fic I read, which are a lot and you can just have a peak in my profile, but there are times I am really busy or sleepy or on the run, to sit down and review! That's why I just rate! and believe me only 20-30% of your readers even rate! Just take a look at how many times your story have been viewed! You can get a good idea how many people are following and are fans! There are a lot and I personally recommend and review this fic in my own forum and I guess you get 10-20 more reader just from there!
All I'm trying to say is you rock and this fiction is awsome! ^_^ and that we really appreciate the fact that you share it with us! Thankssss xoxo
and ohhhh you were talking about Fake and Viewfinder and Under Ground Hotel , ... I don't think there are anyone (well girls) out there that haven't read them or following them! I mean we are here for M/M and we all have read all the famous ones out there, either fictions, mangas, comics, Animes, ... lol It's just nice to know we all share the same taste! :P and Lepidottero recommendations ... well I have read some and I have to check out the rest too! ;) it was just so amazing that you two have this discussion! :D I enjoyed it as much as the fiction itself! :)
Anyway, this chapter was really something! It's been a while that I was thinking about cameras in D's cell and I wondering how come the white coats didn't same anything???!!! O.o Well, it was good to know that it was X's protecting E and D! :D
ommm, I just can't picture E as a father! :D he is soooo alpha male and picturing him taking care of a child is ... emmm impossible! :P well, that should be interesting!!! :D I really do like mpergs :D
Anyway, thanks again for the update and pleaaaaseeee update sooner ^_^ so many people looking forwards to see another update ;)
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November 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just finished this haha :D Lovely story concept, I like that this is set on an isolated prison ship it really gives it that, "we are trapped here" feel; if that makes sense? ^^; I'm real excited that we as the reader finally know a bit more about what is going on :D
Okay I'm going to be the A.D.D reviewer and spout this off but, I really like Xevos and I wanna see his character more, particularly if he is snoging a cute human lol XD
Till next time!
Okay I'm going to be the A.D.D reviewer and spout this off but, I really like Xevos and I wanna see his character more, particularly if he is snoging a cute human lol XD
Till next time!
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November 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow the scientist are really freaking crazy so they can get kids cool chapter like it alot
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November 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, it is slow going but it somehow fits.
Your characters are very interesting, I love Xervos, especially in this chapter, because he becomes more "human".
I like the threat of the scientists that is always in the background when they do something, if forbidden or not.
So please keep on writing!
Your characters are very interesting, I love Xervos, especially in this chapter, because he becomes more "human".
I like the threat of the scientists that is always in the background when they do something, if forbidden or not.
So please keep on writing!
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November 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hhahaha!! Egro is whipped! But THIS is certainly a turn in events that I did NOT expect! However, Dhrele is happy as the other guy has said...So thats good, because he must have been...Not miserable, but maybe void of anything for a while before Egro came along. At first I thought that they wanted to get Egro close to Dhrele and then Kill him to get a reaction from Dhrele...Which would be cruel, but not that surprising really...Wonderful chapter!! I am starting to like the other guy much more now^^ (Cannot remember his name but I know he has an X in the beginning.) Please update as soon as you can! You have done a wonderful job!^^ The plot Thickens!!
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November 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe you didn't get many reviews for chapter 10, it was amazing.
Every chapter is, as a matter of fact.
As much as I love seeing Dhrele and Ergo together, I'm super pumped after this little plot tease in this chapter. ;D
I was sitting over here like a moron mentally cheering "Go Xevos! You can do it!" as I read that he was working on getting them all out of there! Lol
Forgive my pitiful review. I have nothing contructive to put out there... save that I love this story!
Every chapter is, as a matter of fact.
As much as I love seeing Dhrele and Ergo together, I'm super pumped after this little plot tease in this chapter. ;D
I was sitting over here like a moron mentally cheering "Go Xevos! You can do it!" as I read that he was working on getting them all out of there! Lol
Forgive my pitiful review. I have nothing contructive to put out there... save that I love this story!