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Whoa! That was intense. I thought you had abandoned the story, I'm glad you came back.

Please, please, please tell me this amazing story didn't get abandoned...

awww~!
I've read so far and just realized that I haven't even commented this wonderful story or yours yet! :/
SO: I really like the idea, of course, but also the characters are very intersting and I can't wait to see how they'll develop in the story. :)

I hope you'll update soon! :)

"Screw Filia…or not. I don’t know why, but that girl always inspires us to have the best sex."

ROFL. Best chapter ending line yet.

Hm hm hm, looks like Ergo's be fearing the pregnancy... he sort of seems like the type that would choose the delivering position when urged to, but seems like he wanted to avoid that. I thought I wouldn't like Dhrele on top as much... but... actually I think I have no preference now that I've read it... both situations are just as hot o-o. They just both have this appealing potential in my eyes to make a good scene no matter which position there is, which is rare for me because I usually have a strong opinion about who I prefer to be on top most of the time and I thought it was going to be Ergo. But... that was nice. Really nice.

AND VORAGO KEEP YOUR EVIL HANDS OFF FILIA :C. He's going to like... kill her, or fire her because he thinks she and Ergo are getting into something... all because Ergo had his little 'if I wasn't gay' thoughts. Waaaaah... I love Filia, she's totally my type of chick. Cute, shy, blushy, doesn't get in the way, and is totally in love with the badass main character! I don't want her to go ;c... she's the best kind of female. She has such good taste! Me and her could have some good discussions!

'Kay I'm just moaning over here... as always I have 100% faith in whatever you do with this story and there are so many places you could go with the things that happened in this chapter that I want to sit here until the next one comes out >o.

True true, but I always capitalize the first letter of the second person's name if it's a pairing... like DhErgo or ErgDhre... and then if it's some mention of the two character's love child I go Dhergo. XD... But putting the names together like that is one of my favorite things about pairings and what not so I just rambled about that. I think I'll just use that to refer to their possible offspring before he/she (both?) has an actual name is all XD.

Wow super hot chapter. Ive been waiting for the roles to be reversed. totally hot.

Been waiting for that for ages. Holy hell.
Way better than I'd imagined, too. <3333

Yum. Who would have thought that Dhrele is naturally a good lay! It's good that Dhrele can make Ergo loose control. They are of equal standing :)

I wonder now if one of the changes Ergo is going though is that now HE can become prego. I doubt he would react kindly to that LOL

Haha ... lol

That was hot! :D really hot! ;)

Ommm... Ergo wouldn't get pregnant, would he?! :D just imagine him with round belly! :D (kidding) but I was thinking about that maybe D has read Ergo's mind about the cause of why he should top this time?! In that case, how does he feel?! Agreeing with Ergo or maybe getting angry that Ergo doesn't want, hmm no! my mistake, scares to have a child with him?!???

and oh yessss, it was so funny that Dr. V noticed the attraction between Ergo and the girl! I guess he was thinking that if Ergo was interested in the girl, then he couldn't be interested in D and therefore, nothing could had happened! lol that was funny! him getting frustrated over this! ;)

Well gotta go study T.T

Thanks for the update xoxo

Only If Its Yours
is it just me was was that not hot coming from dhrele i can totally see that sensually defenseless sub look on his face
please may i have some more

Hi, just reviewing once more. I guess I can be an aggressive question asker but even though you normally don't answer directly, you really do in a round about way. I read the following chapters and somewhere along the line you do address the questions in the story itself. I like that exchange, it's subtle and it doesn't give up the plot. Sometimes the plot twists in a directions I might not exactly love, but hey its yours and I admire what you do. In the end you keep me guessing and I'm fine with that. So really when people are asking things that might be seem a tad too pushy; just keep in mind that not all of us are trying to shape the story to our own desires but are asking you to give a little input in the reasons for the actions and reactions of your characters and perhaps lets you review how they will react based on your particular formula. It may not change your outcome but explains why you chose that course.
Ex. Mad man + gun = rampage VS
Man + loses job at post office that morning + mental issue + gun = angry man on rampage at post office

P.S. I'm not a fan of grown men pinning after young boys, or really girly ukes, it's always better if there's a some kind of equality even among men. That's why I love the push and pull factor, your story does do that. Keep up the good work