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March 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope all the Xevdren get freed and escape. I love this story so much! I love all the charactors names you made up. Cant wait for more!
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March 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Another chapter!! Very very great chapter I must say! Xenos is gone loose, boy I wonder what he is doing...Though I suspect that he watched Egro walk to Dherel's cell. It looks like things are cooking! He has to kill 3 more, man, that must be hard on him..He doesn't even like having to kill that old women, she sorta reminds me of Genkai in 'Yu Yu Hakusho'. Please update soon^^ I cannot wait for your next chapter for 'Let Him In' as well^^
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March 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
amazing chapter update soon please i cant wait to see what he did to end up in that room or how he saved his lovers life
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March 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope Ergo, Dhrele, and Xevos all escape. And Vex as well. I love this story so much! Cant wait for more!
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March 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, update soon... don't die on us please!:-D
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January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
PHEeewww I love the way this chapter is written... it's almost wordy, but in a very, very good way. I looovvved Dhrele's 'Where have you been' line... it's so like him, and he's so damn great XD. Vex is just confusing me more and more in everything he does... I can't tell if he has some crazy ulterior motives or if he really is trying to help.
I really liked Ergo's conscience coming back to him in this chapter, and of course the way Dhrele is comforting him is just lovely. If nothing else I love that I can tell no matter what that at least Dhrele is on Ergo's side... the rest, maybe aside from Filia, all seem to have hidden agendas that make them all fishy. But Dhrele's so Ergo-oriented. I love that guy.
I love the sort of relationship Ergo and Vorago have... like, one of those things where Vorago hates him but can't really get rid of him or kill him because he needs him for something. Those always make for an interesting bad-guy/good-guy relationship. ...And yeah I'm actually really late on saying that but it was so defined in this chapter I couldn't possibly forget to mention like I have up until now xD.
I really liked Ergo's conscience coming back to him in this chapter, and of course the way Dhrele is comforting him is just lovely. If nothing else I love that I can tell no matter what that at least Dhrele is on Ergo's side... the rest, maybe aside from Filia, all seem to have hidden agendas that make them all fishy. But Dhrele's so Ergo-oriented. I love that guy.
I love the sort of relationship Ergo and Vorago have... like, one of those things where Vorago hates him but can't really get rid of him or kill him because he needs him for something. Those always make for an interesting bad-guy/good-guy relationship. ...And yeah I'm actually really late on saying that but it was so defined in this chapter I couldn't possibly forget to mention like I have up until now xD.
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January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yay ur alive! so glad to see a updaate hopefully there is another one soon
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January 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
thank you for new chapter ..... I cant wait what happens next
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January 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've met Vex too! I actually forgot why that named seemed familiar while playing Skyrim, but I obviously know now!
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January 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMFG. Ergo >c... waaaaaaah poor Ergo, I don't know what to say right now.
That would suck. Really, really suck... ...I wonder who the other two she mentioned are though. Could Vorago be on this list? Yes please?
But anyway, YAY plot. I don't really have that much to say this time because so much new has been thrown in and my head's still spinning o-o. All I can wonder right now is what this is going to change, what Ergo's going to have to do now. I hope he doesn't have to kill anymore nice people because... well, that would kill me :c... I can't stand when characters I like are forced do things I hate.
SAY IT AIN'T SO!!
Anyways... Imma just hug a pillow, and wait...
That would suck. Really, really suck... ...I wonder who the other two she mentioned are though. Could Vorago be on this list? Yes please?
But anyway, YAY plot. I don't really have that much to say this time because so much new has been thrown in and my head's still spinning o-o. All I can wonder right now is what this is going to change, what Ergo's going to have to do now. I hope he doesn't have to kill anymore nice people because... well, that would kill me :c... I can't stand when characters I like are forced do things I hate.
SAY IT AIN'T SO!!
Anyways... Imma just hug a pillow, and wait...