rate_review Reviews

This story is... gah, just AMAZING. I was supposed to be marking my students' papers and instead I spent the evening reading this. I can't even say I regret it--it's been a long, long time (ten years?) since an online story engrossed me this much.

The worst part? Archive binging, then realising chapter seventeen was the latest update and I'd have to wait for more! Which I will. Just, you know, on tenterhooks, praying for you to finish soon.

Great work, in other words. :)

I love this story so much! Cant wait for more!

I'm sorry!! I didn't even realize that there was an update before this one!! I read both and the earlier chapter I was confused, and I still do not understand how Egro......Ohhhh, in the latest chapter he saves Dhrele....Sooo, could they like, tell the future? I know that they can read minds. We are slowly learning more and more about their kind!! Wonderful chapters, keep up the good work! I hope that everything is doing well for you^^

Ergo has become a father!!! lol Yooooohoooooo lol

This is just keep getting more and more interesting! :D

and I guess that big guy is D's father, (oh well: mother), as well?! Isn't he?! Now I am wondering who is his father?! :D

This was sooo damn well worth waiting for! ;) Update soon and thanks for the pm ^_^

This is really interesting! Although I had trouble when he wiped the come on the front of his pants. I hope he intends to wash them immediately? Anyway, awesome story :D I'll keep reading...

This story has so many twists, it really keeps you on your toes. I'm not going to judge cause right now I'm in it for what ever ride you have in mind. It's not that often I find a story that keeps me so excited, every time you update i always debate whether to read right away like opening a gift on Christmas or leaving it alone just a little longer so I could savor it like chocolate that's secreted away an nibbled and enjoyed to its last taste.

THis story is my onlf SF fix in a long time... I hope you update soon.
I wonder what is Xevos doing and who is his mate( Vex?) and Vex's role in all this.

Uh-oh!!!!

You need to update more!!!! This story is so good that my heart stops when I see it on the updated list! Please, please hurry with more!!!

RAAAAAH :C. Ergo is such a little hero... but I dunno what to think >o... Was so hoping Dhrele would be pissed XD. Things seem pretty good when Dhrele is pissed but this might be super pissed and that might be different but yeah... now there's just confusion. The good kind, so don't worry. Wtf is Dhrele talking about? I'm wondering if it was something that I read and forgot over time but I don't think I would... so WHAT!?!

Anyways I don't like Zayas. DON'T LIKE. Maybe I'm just being jealous but... I don't like. Well okay I probably can't judge him yet, hasn't done much, and he does seem like he's on the good side. But for now he needs to go because Ergo and Dhrele and that's all.