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Painful cliffhanger! looking forward to next update

I am pleased to see an update to this unique story, I want to see what happens when they get closer and what's under that mask.

Wow, this story is great. I really like the eerie feeling it got. I have a very strong need to know more :3

That evil Scientist doesn't want to help ANYONE!! He is Lying!! I know that at least. Great chapter! The two seem to get along well, and at least Lux wasn't Killed....Though I wonder if even them taking tgem from their planet to save them from dying is true....I feel like the scientist was lying completely...Though there could be small truths...And man, Dhrel is certainly BOLD, lol^^ Asking to touch him and saying that Lux wishes to to...Though I keep thinking of Dhrel as like a child, sense he doesn't know certain things, a overgrown child^^ But I like him and Lux^^ Update soon!!! This story has great portental!!! I hope they don't try and take Dhrel out and conduct bad experiments on him.....

neat! theres some nice new developments happening. i like it!

I was just so thrilled that you updated, I haven't been this excited since well, sliced bread. Way to go!

Good start! i really enjoyed these first 2 chapters, bookmarked and looking forward to further updates :)

Hello!! Man Oh Man this was certainly an interesting start! The alien didn't kill and eat him like I thought, or more so attempt to kill and eat him. The two might even become friends, but I hope he won't be getting punished by those so called "Doctors" Or whatever they are, scientists. Please update soon!! I think this will be very awesome! For some reason I think this will be cute as well^^

i hope you update soon!

Oh no it's either a scientist or soldiers. Run boy run.