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Ahhh!! Great chapter^^ Though it is short, it gives a big BIG cliff hanger....I am wondering is Drehl (Sorry bad at spelling) is gonna bite Lux?? Maybe he was just so curious that he bites into his neck and almost bleeds him to death.......Poor Lux....Though I found it funny how curious some simple Stuble can make Drelh sound like a perv, or more so, make Lux sound a bit of one.... Like the whole "Do It", Hhahaha, that made me laugh, he sounded very serious....Please update soon!! I wonder what the labcoats would say if they found out about this?? Sorry that I did not review sooner, I've come down with a pretty bad sore throat. Please Update soon!!

suprised to see another chapter so soon i'm used to waiting weeks ( sometimes months :| ) for updates, your updating is quick, it's great :) i love how mysterious and dangerous Dhrele is, knowing he can kill people without even touching them? you have to be brave to go up to him.. it adds a thrill to reading it, not knowing what will happen next. can't wait till next update :)

Really liking this! Dhrele seems really interesting.

Ohh... so sweet ;D I love how fascinated they are of each other, and how tenderly they get to know small things about each other. What's with the teeth? Dhrele's not going to eat him, I hope? I know many stories do biting as a mating ritual thing, but I've seen enough weird stories where the alien actually takes a real chomp out of their partner... so I'm just asking :P

another fabulous chapter, albeit a bit short. I have an intense love for Dhrele, He has a seductive quality about him that I adore. I can't wait to read one. This story - and Dhrele in particular - have drawn me in. ^_^

things are heating up! I love that there is an element of danger. Very sexy.

you tease!

is dhrelle blind? or does he just have something over his eyes?

that bit about 'people adopting wild animals and treating them like kids' part, was that a shot at that woman who had that monkey, you know, THAT monkey, the one that tore off her friends face? i totally agree with you by the way.
update quickly, like right now! lol..... i figure that dhrelle likes ergo so much is because he can feel the guys yearning to be back on land, or a friend too... im thinking its more the land part, they both miss home and dhrelle finds hes not the only one with such a yearning.
oh, is dhrelle an actual alien, or was he human and the scientist experimented on him and made him half alien? or was he incubated on the ship? ergo felt like the scientist was lying when he was talking to him, so maybe they stole the poor alien or something?
the touching is neat, its like how a blind person sees, with their hands.

Oh, an update!!! Love the long chapter! And I hope Ergo wont be a total idiot and believe in Virgos plans. I'm curious to see what Dhrele will do to Ergo in the future... I hope for at least one little tiny piece of lemon :P Keep up the good work X)