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September 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow. bahaha... that was amusing. who knew that ergo had a naughty side to him!
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September 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love this one! Just wish there was more to it. *pouts*
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August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good read so far, everything is so cryptic. Can't wait for more.
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August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
neat. xevos seems like one scary badass dude, but i bet hes a teddy bear!
dude, is ergo ... changing into one those aliens? i hope he doesnt change to much, i like his skin tone and eye color. i bet hes a cute lil lad! *irish lingo.
dude, is ergo ... changing into one those aliens? i hope he doesnt change to much, i like his skin tone and eye color. i bet hes a cute lil lad! *irish lingo.
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August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I......Don't like Xeovus( Sorry for the spelling) He's scary......I would NOT want to be Lux right now!! Why did they bring him to him?? Are they wanting to see if he has some sort of power with those type of human/alian people?? And what is Dehrel trying to protect Lux from?? Great chapter I must say!! Please update soon!!! I also wonder what types of dreams he would be having, Lux...
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August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love the little world you have on this ship
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August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow!!! I just finished reading all five chapters back to back and I really enjoyed reading them!
It's the second or maybe third time that I am reading a human/alien yaoi fic and I have to say that yours is very unique in its own way! Dhrele is very interesting and way you describe him ^_^
I guess what i like the most is your style to describe feelings, it's really amazing :)
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About the story, I have to say I really like the idea of Dhrele injecting a little bit of his blood/poison (or whatever it is) in Ergo's body. I guess it will act like a vacsine to protect Ergo from probable biting from other aliens! and I guess that's how Dhrele kills the other humans just using a much more amount?! Am I guessing right?!
I well the way they touch each other was very sensual :D I didn't mind it to continue! and I don't mind Ergo to help Dhrele to escape :D
BTW, have you seen "Ergo Proxy"?! The first thing I reminded of, when I read his name, was this Anime! lol
Anyway, thanks you very much for the great fic! xoxo
It's the second or maybe third time that I am reading a human/alien yaoi fic and I have to say that yours is very unique in its own way! Dhrele is very interesting and way you describe him ^_^
I guess what i like the most is your style to describe feelings, it's really amazing :)
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About the story, I have to say I really like the idea of Dhrele injecting a little bit of his blood/poison (or whatever it is) in Ergo's body. I guess it will act like a vacsine to protect Ergo from probable biting from other aliens! and I guess that's how Dhrele kills the other humans just using a much more amount?! Am I guessing right?!
I well the way they touch each other was very sensual :D I didn't mind it to continue! and I don't mind Ergo to help Dhrele to escape :D
BTW, have you seen "Ergo Proxy"?! The first thing I reminded of, when I read his name, was this Anime! lol
Anyway, thanks you very much for the great fic! xoxo
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August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
But you can call me Shirley(surely) hahahahaha.
Boy am I baffled with this Xevos.
So far I like this story too much for my own good but Xevos is not..I eman red eyes and universe black hole coloration*scared*
more unnamed bishies to soothe me, pretty please with a cherry on top:)
Boy am I baffled with this Xevos.
So far I like this story too much for my own good but Xevos is not..I eman red eyes and universe black hole coloration*scared*
more unnamed bishies to soothe me, pretty please with a cherry on top:)
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August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hm, maybe its an all male race the color differenciates 'male' and 'female'...
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August 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay they are getting closer, touching is a good start. I bet the doctor would stroke out if he knew how easy it was for them to get along when he can't get him to do anything.