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love how this story is going. you rushed on chapter six though since the transition wasn't as smooth as the previous chapters. i am enjoying all that you've written so far. greatly anticipating your next chapter for this story. hope to read more from you soon. keep up the great work! thanks a bunch

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that was awesome.

did not see that coming!

wow i love this story already updated soon really good story so far

wow! that was delicious ... :D

You do not have any idea how it feels to wake up and see one your favorite fics has been updated! :D You just made my day! ^_^ Thank you

Every thing in this chapter was very interesting, giving away a little bit of info which was great. I guess all of your readers were curious to know more.

I don't know if the bite and the venom is only for protection! It seems like it is changing Ergo a lot, his temperature, his vision, ... I just wonder if it keeps changing him and he will end up just like Dhrele himself! :D

The thing about the smell! It seems like something animals do in nature to mark their territory. and marking Ergo as his own, does it mean something like marking a mate?! :) and I notice this is not a mperg fic, so I guess this is as far as you go with these two! ^_^

The last scene with Ergo tending to be dominant was sooo interesting :D you know sometimes I wonder if I were a male instead of a female, which one would have I prefer? to be a Seme or Uke? lol strange isn't it? but I notice I didn't mind being a Seme! :P so I guess I could understand Ergo's feelings :P

Thanks for the reply ^_^ great to know that you are an anime lover as well :)

and thanks again for the update xoxo

That is nice of Egro, although I myself if I were Dhrel would have been a bit more um.....Less blunt and less willing to let someone I've known for like a week do that...But then again I am not him and he is not me and he seems that maybe he wishes to experience new things with Egro, more then just the sex, but more so of whats out there, outside of his room. Sense he himself doesn't know, but he trusts and Likes Egro and wishes to have help. I wish to know what color his hair is and such, but that most likely will be later on, still, very good chapter. That X, um, other hybrid isn't as scary as I first thought of him thankfully he isn't going to try and rip Egro's head off like i Thought he might do...He was very moody. Great chapter! I hate that doctor Vorgoe's guts, but then again, who doesn't? Lol. Please update soon!!

God that was incredible! I mean, just hot damn! I do homecare for a living and I tell you there are no sexy erotic movements when giving sponge baths.

I'm just THRILLED to have found this story!
It's very good and I'm definitely looking forward to reading more!

OMG MORE NOOOO T___T So good! I love the characters and where the story is going so far! I don't want to bore you with me gushing at you so I just hope you'll update soon!

That. Was. Hot! I love the two sides of light and dark... The flow is smooth and the pace interesting, calm and purposeful. Thanks a lot. Many questions come to mind but u are answering these as they arrive. I cant wait to see where this is headed!!!!

i am really really liking this story and i cant wait for more, please upload more very soon!!!