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Ahhhh Dhrele, he's soooo cute with his love of Egro's facial hair!! I don't know why but I find it adorable that he likes his scruffy face so much, lol^^ I amd sad to think that the doctors don't feed Dhrele because he's a "Failur" and just give him what he needs... And I wonder if Xreo (sp?) is smelling all those sexy times Egro is having with Dhrele, lol^^ Or his doom?? Great chapter!! Please update soon!!

enjoyable as usual. definitely looking forward to the next chapter.

Ahah! The ever-insistent Dhrele at it again. I love the progress in this chapter, and I'll bet Xevos /knows/ what's been going on between those two... I get the suspicion that Vorago does to. I've wondered since the beginning if there were like, night-vision or infrared cameras watching them the entire time. Though something tells me Ergo wouldn't care that much, but that would be creepy on Vorago's plot.

Anyway, the plot thickens! I can't wait to see how Ergo finds away to release and rescue Dhrele from his little prison, and I wonder if they'll bring Xevos along too? The bit with Vex was interesting, and it's obvious that /something/ inhuman is going on with Ergo's body. Thinking Dhrele may not have been entirely honest with him, but I hope it's nothing bad. Superhuman strength, advanced intelligence/awareness level maybe? Aha, just thinking little random cliches out loud... I really can't wait to see where you take all of this!

And the next chapter especially... wonder if the fifteenth date is enough for Ergo to take it to the next step ;D.

Thank you thank you for the update! It really makes my day! ^_^

hmmm what really makes me think is why Xevos respond to him like that?! Is it because he is becoming Dhrele's mate gradually?! smells like him and all?! getting the same eye vision, ...

I hope Vex can help them escape! I just wonder if there is a vessel they can use and then where are they going to flee to?!

lol, well I can't wait to read more and maybe now that Dhrele can move around, we could see more action between them! :D I confess! I am really interested to see how it can go between these two! :P

Thanks again :)

As always, you know how to keep us ignorant fools guessing and reguessing; cause seriously I still don't have a clue. But this whole abstinence thing totally not working for me. Please have a heart, I so want to see the two get all.... you know. All in all excellent update, it's made my day; seriously when you're between clients it's really nice to have something this entertaining to keep you occupied.

I completely ADORE you for updating so quickly. <333333333

All right, so, wow. I'm so speechless. Let me start by saying this is the most well-written supernatural/science fiction piece I've read online in a long time... possibly in my life. ...I was so depressed to see that I was on the last chapter, and I'm dying, and I mean /dying/ for more. It seems you just updated so I'm not going to demand updatez nao or anything like that, but I am going to say that... yeah, I pretty much live for an update to this story.

The whole thing is so well played out. The characters are lovable, especially Dhrele, how silly and naive he is about everything, yet insistent and demanding, straightforward. I love how Ergo tries to explain the unexplainable view of the sex to love ratio that human beings have all had etched into their brains, but Dhrele is so rebellious, and once again, so insistent. It's very rare that I become er... sexually moved by a story, but I have to say that some of Dhrele's demanding lines sent sparks to nice places. Had to stop and catch my breath a few times. Can only imagine how Ergo is able to resist.

But it's going so perfectly, not too fast, and not to slow. I love the way you're putting this together, and the plot seems equally interesting as their relationship development. Keep up the good work! Most definitely looking forward to this update, if I haven't said that ten times already!

To add a nice twist to the ending, wouldn't it be messed up if Dhrele was controlling all events and manipulating all the people on the ship all along, since his creation. Ergo is getting too cocky. And sort of mean. But I suppose that is what Dherle is looking for in a mate. Is this going to become an Mpreg? It would totally flip the tables if Dherle got Ergo pregnant instead of the other way around. Besides, Dher is not catching on to the whole idea of women get pregnant, men don't. In fact, he seems to be blatantly rejecting the idea. Like he can change it if they have sex long enough. Is there anything Dherle is not telling Ergo????? We still do not know what sweet, innocent, loving Dherle did to Ergo to change him and protect him? Is that why Ergo is acting more, and more dominant and mean?

Great story. Thanks for the creepy reading time. I love it.

Awe, I'm soo disappointed like the alien I guess I was hoping for more, anyway, the chapter made my day a little brighter. Regardless I like your story and always look forward for more. The random facts are kind of neat.

Dhrele is a little stinker. Mischievious minx! This story is great. It is creepy, macabre, mysterious, disturbing... and yet cute, funny, and sexy... all roled into one. I don't know how that is possible, but it is well done! Every chapter is excellently written, and beta'd. I hope the ending has a real twist to it. It deserves a very TWISTED ending, whether or not a happy one.