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for A Matter of Chance

by nomduporn

person cutiecat
schedule July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was pretty good... Are you going to write another chapter? Perhaps, he can keep her to himself or find some way for Slate to change his mind about wanting her?
schedule April 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
...Wow. I dearly hope you plan to continue this, and update it soon, because I really want to know what's going to happen. And congratulations on an absolutely awesome sex scene! Well done!
person Unimportant
schedule July 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*wipes sweat off brow* whew! holy blast furnaces that was hot. You need to update...soon!!!
person Avih
schedule June 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well written and well balanced. I liked this very much. You managed to keep it erotic and not just poenografic, not easily done.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
schedule June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very good!! I really hope you update this. You write very well and the story has a good flow to it, not too fast not too slow, and hot sex :)