rate_review Reviews

Thank you for a very entertaining read. I am egar to read more. Also I'm wondering if you are the same author of Haunted City. I like that one too

Love Jericho, he's such an interesting, intriguing character. Wish you'd write more about him and his backstory.

(3) I read this update before the Haunted City one so I kind of ruined the surprise but either way I'm glad that these guys finally got to have their version of a happy ending :) I liked that little show of anger from Toby he really did need to make Jericho realize just what exactly he was capable of and not to underestimate him. It was actually all rather sweet of these two even considering what they had been through.

I'm glad we got to see a bit of Jericho and Toby's story, it was a really great chapter :) As I said I went back and read Haunted but it's like one in the morning so I'll come back and review tomorrow (or technically today) Goodnight^^

I want to cry now!!!! I just feel so sad for Toby already and it's only the second page!!!! I await more news of this poor catboy... read ya laters!

so nice, i love it please more

Oh, great! I'm looking forward to knowing more about Tobias and his relationship with Jericho! This chapter is a little bittersweet, though, knowing what will come afterwards...
By the way, is Vesper related to Ajax? His mother maybe (and we could later know how she died)? Sorry if you already mentioned it in Haunted City, I might have forgotten... But it would mean that Jericho is much older than I thought. Is being a mage making him live longer and look more youthful? Does it mean that Ajax could potentially live longer too, if he survives his curse?
Sorry, that's for another story. Anyway, hope to learn more about Tobias - and I really really hope he'll have his happy ending with Jericho one day! If Jericho accepts his need to be a familiar, I guess...

Oh I really want more of these two! They're just so tragically adorable.

Awesome story! Can't wait for your next update. I was just wondering, are you still going planning to continue with Juicy Fruit? That's like my fav story of all times... and you just left me hanging....

Normally I'm a little on the fence with fantasy type stories but these characters certainly are interesting and grab your attention. It's easy to understand why Toby would get tired of being unbound, who wants to feel like they're just not good enough. Mind you, is the situation he's in any better - mistake machine indeed.

Also since reading this I checked out Haunted to see what it was all about and I think I'm now going to be watching for an update on it, the whole universe seems like it's going to be interesting but also the characters seem so ordinary but with very unusual problems. Looking forward to more about all these guys :)

Oh I was a bit confused at the beginning because I couldn't remember seeing them in Haunted City. So they are not in the story yet actually? I feel so sorry for Toby, though. Will things get better for him and with Jericho, or will he just stay miserable and Jericho frustrated and full of regrets? Plus, who is the mysterious new master? I do hope we'll know more in Haunted City because these new characters have lots of potential. Toby is so cute - and he's a cat too! (I love cats)