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December 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Greetings.
I have just discovered your little gem and am fascinated by the mercenary character you have created. He comes across as such as lost and wounded soul in just a few short chapters. He also comes across as young. Why? I don't know but he seems to be in his late twenties when I assumed he would be forties or up. I will head on over to your live journal to see if there are more chapters but I do hope your continue the story. I want to find out why he killed his little brother.
I have just discovered your little gem and am fascinated by the mercenary character you have created. He comes across as such as lost and wounded soul in just a few short chapters. He also comes across as young. Why? I don't know but he seems to be in his late twenties when I assumed he would be forties or up. I will head on over to your live journal to see if there are more chapters but I do hope your continue the story. I want to find out why he killed his little brother.
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December 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, it's been a while but I'm glad this is continuing. ^^
I feel sympathy for their communication probs. it's hard to get things done if you can't talk to each other.
I feel sympathy for their communication probs. it's hard to get things done if you can't talk to each other.
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December 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've missed this story. It's awesome :3
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September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
huhu..still around? i found this story to be quite interesting and the cliffhanger is killing me!!!
soooo will there be more soon?
soooo will there be more soon?
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July 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
damit i HATE cliffhangers!!! especially if the story is sooooooo goooooodddd!!!
please update soon?
please update soon?
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June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awwwweesooommeeee!
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June 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you right. Sort of compelling. I wonder why the wolf saved him. Lookds forward to fi9ndign out.
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June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Amazing depth and great lead ins. I'm already ready for more :)
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June 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this your plot is intriguing, and your main character has depth and interest. It's your descriptions that have truly won me over. They are so visceral they make me truly feel like I'm a part of the setting, watching it play out rather than just reading it. Thank you, this has been a joy to read and I loom forward to reading more.
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June 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
How sad, this poor man...