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I really liked this, though I also suffer from insomnia and I'm kind of jealous :P

Can't help but wonder what she saw though.

Loved it :)

I thought it was excellent. This is a ghost fic, yes? Please please continue! That was one hell of a cliffhanger and it would be a shame for you to leave it there. Besides that, I adore your writing style.

Please continue this if you can. The concept of the unknown, ambiguous partner is really great, and you've written it really well. It would be interesting if the whole chapter was a dream, because then future encounters with her unknown partner would not have to follow the rules of reality (for example, sex without gravity). If the chapter was in reality, perhaps her partner could have supernatural powers, which can lead to all sorts of fun things. I really like the unknown partner- it would be cool if he stayed anonymous for awhile longer- as in, she can never see him, or talk with him, only feel him. Great job writing this- please keep it up!

Continue the story. Even if it's just one chapter.

I enjoyed the first chapter, it would be nice to see where it went in the next chapter :-). Another chapter would be great!

VERY erotic! I loved the slow pacing; every nerve ending and every shiver was captured in full detail. Please continue this!

Linda

For a first piece, it was very good. I would recommend a repeat of that "dream". Any chance of another chapter?