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June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good start, I enjoyed reading the small details. It helps you to get to know the characters,, something tells me the boys neighbor isn't as strait as he appears. Look forward to more story. G
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May 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can't see anything you're doing wrong. I love your writing style. It flows smooth, I like the characters, t he little bits of detail. I hope you update soon :) *Moved last review spelling mistake*
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May 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a great first chapter! I love all the characters so far; even Catherine! lol
I loved the fact that the chapter was so long; I found myself really getting into the chapter!
I'm looking foward to the next update! Oh, btw: how do you pronounce Briton? Like Brighton, or like Britian?
I loved the fact that the chapter was so long; I found myself really getting into the chapter!
I'm looking foward to the next update! Oh, btw: how do you pronounce Briton? Like Brighton, or like Britian?