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Oh, and I forgot to mention I'm so proud of Briton! He actually did what he was afraid to do all along! Good for him! :)

Well, I'm glad Jack and Briton got to spend some nice quality time together. Even if Jack is a tease! lol

I'm proud of Briton for not backing down once Aaron cornered him. And of course, come to find out Aaron already suspected. haha

I'm looking foward to their night out at the Hilton! How come Jack didn't mention the stayover at the hotel?

Ok, I get the whole Briton thinks he's the "man" in the relationship and therefore can't "submit" to Jack, and giving head would be submitting as far as Briton's concerned. And of course I'm assuming he would never "submit" to being on the receiving end once they wind up screwing. Ok Briton, get the fuck over yourself! That's all I have to say. If us girls can give head, so the fuck can you. It's really no big fucking deal. lol So there! I said my peace. And why wouldn't he want to do something he KNOWS his boyfriend will enjoy? I don't get that part. Can't he just suck it up (pardon the pun) and do it for Jack? And who knows, he may wind up liking it. :)

Now there's a few parts in this chapter I don't understand. First, Briton and Jack are b/f's, right? Or did I miss something? So when you have a boyfriend, don't you want to spend as much time with him as you can? At least that's how I feel. So when Briton and Jack decided to hold off on the bj, why did Briton go back to his apartment? That made no sense to me. Why couldn't they just hang out? It made it seem that they were only getting together for a bj. That's cheap. Their relationship isn't based on sex, so why didn't they just hang out, order a pizza, play video games or watch tv? Just to spend time with one another? That didn't make sense to me at all, Briton going back to his apartment.

Second, what the fuck is up with Cameron? And I thought Jack never mentioned Austin's name???? But if Cameron knows Austin likes him, and he's not sure of anything, why is he suddenly becoming all buddy buddy with him? Is it he is confused, like he said? So when Austin kissed him he pretty much freaked out. Well, he better apologize to Austin in teh next chapter.

Oh, and I had another thought: why doesn't Jack introduce Austin to Nathan?

Ok, looking forward to the next installment! :)

Shout out to little old me? Haha, thank you :]
So I'm going to say Briton is essentially a virgin to many things, and that was very surprising. His lack of activity with his ex-girl really shows how gay he was...or just how much he can't control himself around Jack. Hehe! I'm so glad he came out to more people, that Briton. Although, if he had still denied his sexuality at THAT point, I would seriously consider whether he'd ever be out of the closet.
More characters? Oh my! And to seemingly break Nathan's heart too! Yes, I am very pleased. A little more drama to add on top of his living situation. Can't forget about the clash between Briton and Jack. Their make up was even more pleasing. That's why I'm a drama monster--it makes the resolution so much sweeter.
And Austin...I only vaguely remember him at this point. But I'd like to think you didn't include him earlier for nothing! I look forward to his comeback.
I'm very happy to have read another of your sexy scenes too ;D I thought it was unbelievably sweet, and not because it was their first time. I'm sure it was their constant looks and touches. Ah, and super detailed. I forgot how detailed you get! Not that I'm complaining.
Thanks so much for the update~ It really was worth the wait :]

Hey, thanks for the shout-out! I feel so honored! lol

I'm so glad to see this story again; I've missed these boys! :)

I had to read my review from last time so I could re-familiarize myself with what I wrote! hahah

I was gonna comment about Briton's first bj, but then you cleared it up when you explained that him and Catherine never did anything. Hard to believe a GUY wanted to wait until marriage.

I still don't understand the "ex" term though. Didn't Jack go on only one date with Nathan? They weren't dating, so I wouldn't call them "ex's".

Anyway...loved, loved, loved the scene in Barnes and Noble (or was it Border's? My Border's closed, dammit, and my Barnes and Noble doesn't have a cafe, so that sucks, lol) where Nathan thought he was going on his first "date" with Ryan, hahah. I kinda felt bad for him too, but wow, now all four boys can hang out. Gotta find a boy for Nathan - oh yeah, Austin! Was he the waiter from the place where Jack, Briton and Catherine ate?

Awesome chapter! Welcome back and I can't wait for more! :)

Before I say anything else, you are so mean! I sincerely didn't expect you to end there. I guess that's what I get, haha! I really find it cute that neither are willing to have sex yet. OH, and did Nathan really back down? I know it's been two weeks since their first talk, but I'm still surprised. But thanks for focusing so much on Briton and Jake's relationship; it's very sweet. I really can't write a proper review, I'm just randomly spouting what comes to mind! AND OH GOSH, do they really love each other? What if they aren't!? I'm addicted to drama, I just realized. Even more than the sexy time, I think that's what I'm looking forward to: the drama. Thank you very much for the update I can't imagine what I'll see from here.

I think these boys are so cute and somewhat naive. I also don't really trust Nathan and don't know why Jack is confiding in him. Obviously the only reason Nathan is still with the guy he lives with is because he's using him for a free ride. Free rent and utilities, etc. Nathan should try to find a second job so he can afford is own place.

I think if Briton finds out Jack's been hanging out with Nathan, he's gonna be pissed. Or at least pretty annoyed.

Now I don't understand the whole Catherine thing. So Briton broke up w/Catherine, just like that? They must have been going out for quite awhile if they were already exchanging I love you's. Although so did Jack and Briton; way too soon I believe. Anyway, this is what I don't get: Catherine just ups and leaves? Totally accepts the fact that they're not right for each other, when just the day before everything was peachy keen? I don't get it. Also, if Briton has all this experience w/Catherine, don't why does he need tips from his older brothers on getting to second base? Didn't he get farther than that with his girlfriend? And don't tell me he and Catherine never Frenched before???? That I can't believe. I think Briton should be a bit more experienced that Jack since he did do things with Catherine.

Anyway...it was a really good chapter. I'm glad you updated and yes, you left us at with a cliffie, bad, bad author! lol Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

Wow, didn't see THAT one coming! lol I knew something was up w/Briton. I actually thought he was bi....poor Catherine. I don't think she's gonna take this lightly. I mean, they confessed their love to each other! She's in love with him.

Now Nathan, on the other hand, I sorta can't blame him. I mean, he was into that guy when he moved in with him. He was going to break it off, but hey, you can't do that when you find out your b/f is going to war, fighting for his country and his life! So I'm pretty much up in the air with him. Of course this does throw a wrench into the whole Nathan/Jack/Briton thingy.....oooh, I know, a threesome! hahah, J/K!

Good chapter, looking forward to the next one; wait till Nathan finds out about Briton.....lol

You should have heard my reaction at the end of chapter two. I almost choked on my own gasp, haha. I sincerely didn't see Nathan as being Jack's first lover, so I'm kind of glad that he's gotten on Jack's bad side. BUT I do believe he really loves Jack...so I'll see where this goes! As for Austin and Briton, I don't know what to think of them yet. Though hey, only two fabulous chapters so far~ There really are many place you can take this, and I can't wait to read 'em! Thanks for the update~

P.S. I can't believe this cliff hanger. I can't! Yet I should have expected it...haaaaaaa

That two-timing Nathan! Ok, I knew something was up when all of a sudden he was "busy" when Jack called him when he didn't have to work. And how the fuck can he love Jack when he's known him all of what, one day? Two days? Omg, Nathan, grow up! And plus you have a LIVE-IN-BOYFRIEND TO BOOT!!!!! Serves you right having Jack walk out on you.

Well, as you can tell I hate the story, hahah. Oh, it was funny; someone was asking in the Forum about this story, but she/he finally found it!

Anyway, I was so excited to see this updated; I can't wait for the next chapter. I wanna see how Nathan talks himself out of this one! Poor Jack....