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April 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hi , just doing my first review of your story cause i have just read all 14 chapters :D i have to say i do enjoy reading it, and the chapters to start with where feelings were high n stuff was intense was good, i loved that whole 'omg will they wont they' sort of feeling lol
some parts are a bit sketchy n short,but ure sex scenes are pretty amazing 0_0 like wow! 5*. but i totally understand why n that, ill give u credit for even writing a story like this, i wish i was able to lol
cant wait for the rest of the story, n i do love jack n briton ^_^ keep up the awsome wrk heheh
some parts are a bit sketchy n short,but ure sex scenes are pretty amazing 0_0 like wow! 5*. but i totally understand why n that, ill give u credit for even writing a story like this, i wish i was able to lol
cant wait for the rest of the story, n i do love jack n briton ^_^ keep up the awsome wrk heheh
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April 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, I think Ryan is too naive. I hope Mark doesn't try to take advantage of him.
And I absolutely LOVE Briton's mom! I think it's so cool that she's ok with Briton being gay. I would have thought that she'd be 'old school' in her thinking, but she surprised me!
Great job TK! :)
And I absolutely LOVE Briton's mom! I think it's so cool that she's ok with Briton being gay. I would have thought that she'd be 'old school' in her thinking, but she surprised me!
Great job TK! :)
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February 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I'm so glad for Cameron! He finally came to terms with who he is! :) And now he brightened Austin's day, which is good, b/c Austin has been having a horrid time so far! Damn that idiot Brandon. :(
Great chapter TK! I'm glad Ryan and Troy are back on track, although Ryan does feel guilty, as he should. He should have never done anything with Tristan just b/c Troy wasn't pay much attention to him.
And what's with Jack not showing affection for Briton? He can't be feeling the seven year itch already! lol
But I'm really happy for Austin; he deserves some happiness. =)
Great chapter TK! I'm glad Ryan and Troy are back on track, although Ryan does feel guilty, as he should. He should have never done anything with Tristan just b/c Troy wasn't pay much attention to him.
And what's with Jack not showing affection for Briton? He can't be feeling the seven year itch already! lol
But I'm really happy for Austin; he deserves some happiness. =)
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February 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am so sad about Ryan. I thought he and Troy were the perfect couple. I hope Troy will be able to forgive him when he finds out.
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February 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading your story and the characters are so cute. I like the fact that they are regular guys trying to live regular lives and yet the story is so interesting. Good job on the writing.
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January 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh I feel so bad for Austin. Brandon is such a prick to take advantage of him like that.
And Ryan; he really surprised me. I know that Troy isn't giving him much attention, but they do love each other and Ryan shouldn't be doing anything with anyone else. He really needs to talk to Troy and tell him how he really feels. Maybe he should tell Troy about Tristan. (Hopefully he'll feel guilty enough and not do anything).
Good chapter TK! Welcome back! lol
And Ryan; he really surprised me. I know that Troy isn't giving him much attention, but they do love each other and Ryan shouldn't be doing anything with anyone else. He really needs to talk to Troy and tell him how he really feels. Maybe he should tell Troy about Tristan. (Hopefully he'll feel guilty enough and not do anything).
Good chapter TK! Welcome back! lol
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December 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ha, I was laughing when they were trying to snowboard! It seems like they all shoulda taken some lessons! lol
So what exactly was Peter doing with Cameron? Was he just drunk? And then in the morning he acted like such an ass. And poor Catherine is in the dark.
And why would Cameron even want to be with Peter? When he could have Austin, who's been paying him the most attention. And what's with Joel? At first, a chapter or two ago, I thought Cameron and Joel were more than just roommates. Does Joel have feelings for Cameron?
All these questions! Sorry! Looking forward to reading more about their ski trip!
Happy New Year tk! :)
So what exactly was Peter doing with Cameron? Was he just drunk? And then in the morning he acted like such an ass. And poor Catherine is in the dark.
And why would Cameron even want to be with Peter? When he could have Austin, who's been paying him the most attention. And what's with Joel? At first, a chapter or two ago, I thought Cameron and Joel were more than just roommates. Does Joel have feelings for Cameron?
All these questions! Sorry! Looking forward to reading more about their ski trip!
Happy New Year tk! :)
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December 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Short chapter is right! lol
Luckily Austin's friends are with him and will help his become reality. haha
I do feel so bad for him though; he still has it bad for Cameron, and Cameron's gonna "flaunt" Joel right in front of Austin.
Looking forward to reading about their weekend. :)
Luckily Austin's friends are with him and will help his become reality. haha
I do feel so bad for him though; he still has it bad for Cameron, and Cameron's gonna "flaunt" Joel right in front of Austin.
Looking forward to reading about their weekend. :)
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November 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hahah, you make me laugh tk! lol
So, who is this Joel boy? Looks like Cameron has his eyes on his roommate. So why did he lie to Austin about being straight? Or is he really just confused? Was the look Joel gave Austin when he left a look of, "I know what you're up to and you better leave my b/f alone" look? Or a, "yeah, he's telling me he's straight also" look?
And I think Nathan should find a part-time job and get the hell out of that apartment. He's just using Marshall and it's not fair to Marshall. If Nathan is so unhappy with Marshall, he should be trying his best to move out so he can move on with his life.
I love the different characters in the story; I'm glad it's not only about Jack and Briton. Oh, and that conversation in the coffee line: hysterical! I can't believe other people (besides the guy in front of them) didn't hear what they were talking about!
And Briton should definitely make a move towards Jack. Of course one time just is NOT enough and now that they experienced it, they should want it all the time! lol :)
So, who is this Joel boy? Looks like Cameron has his eyes on his roommate. So why did he lie to Austin about being straight? Or is he really just confused? Was the look Joel gave Austin when he left a look of, "I know what you're up to and you better leave my b/f alone" look? Or a, "yeah, he's telling me he's straight also" look?
And I think Nathan should find a part-time job and get the hell out of that apartment. He's just using Marshall and it's not fair to Marshall. If Nathan is so unhappy with Marshall, he should be trying his best to move out so he can move on with his life.
I love the different characters in the story; I'm glad it's not only about Jack and Briton. Oh, and that conversation in the coffee line: hysterical! I can't believe other people (besides the guy in front of them) didn't hear what they were talking about!
And Briton should definitely make a move towards Jack. Of course one time just is NOT enough and now that they experienced it, they should want it all the time! lol :)
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October 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a sex scene! You wrote it so beautifully, it was so easy to see the love these boys have for each other.
I'm sure Briton couldn't have asked for a better birthday present! lol :) And all I can say is it took them long enough! Just kidding; it's great that Jack held off just so he could give Briton a great b-day gift. =)
I'm sure Briton couldn't have asked for a better birthday present! lol :) And all I can say is it took them long enough! Just kidding; it's great that Jack held off just so he could give Briton a great b-day gift. =)