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for Tear Down The Sky

by CarnivalOfRust

person poppyhigh
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah....really love to read the next chapter and hope to read more. Always support you
person miles
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, God ! This chapter is so funny ! Hahaha !
More please ^^
person Liz
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ug, God, Joss was annoying. I like this story, it has promise, but she is REALLY annoying. I get liking the energy, but it's possible to be energetic without being so... her. Other than that it's a good story, and I want to keep reading.
person RT
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOL poor Patrick,totally scared out of his mind. I want to see how this unfolds, update when you can? :D...
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ROFL. I was gasping for breath by the end of the second chapter. SO funny! Man, you got a talent for humor, seriously. I'm following this story for sure, keep em comin! :)
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
keep the story goingg i want more!!! good joob
person Anonymous
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I especially like the ending to chapter two. I was laughing so hard! Please, update soon.
person eatmorefish
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
enjoying it, keep it coming :)
person Lisa
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg, I LOVE Joss! What a hoot she is! lol Butt-sex, haha! :)

So, Patrick and Mr. TDH exchanged phone numbers, hmmmmm? Why oh why is Mr. Spongebob Patrick so against finding out more about this sexy guy? lol

Great chapter. Patrick is too damn funny!

Can't wait for more! :)
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com