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for Tear Down The Sky

by CarnivalOfRust

schedule May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was a tease! Finally got to the phone call then nada. Can't wit till they meet again!
person anon
schedule May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is really fantastic, i'm hooked and it is only the second chapter!

Can't wait for the next one!
person arya
schedule May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ohmy god. that was super cute. like super cute. please write the next chapter soon. I can't wait to read it!
person Jetfire
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it, can't remember whether I reviewed this or not, I try to review stuff that's good, since its so rare and inbetween. Anyway keep up the hard work!!! Sooo good, need more of this.

Huggins Aduial
person jada
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! I already love this :) Patrick is so cute being so conservative haha can't wait to see where this goes once he meets his one night stand again
person shadow
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
omg this is such a good story!!!! I really want to hear more!!!!
person Tbd
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think this is my new favorite ongoing story here. Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Jay
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read more!!
person yFkMe
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
SOO. I never read stories on Aff because 1. im lazy 2. i have no time and 3. because i dont want to accidentallly put some faction of someone elses story in my own and 4. because no one updats on aff.

buuuuuut. I saw your story and it intrigued me and since it had 2 chaps I decided to give it a looksee. I really enjoyed it a lot. In fact I added it to my favorites on my phone so i remember to check for updates.

I reallly loved the celly thing in fact I wished there was more because it made me go all daaaw/oooaah. I can't wait to read more about Patrick&his one nighter.

I truly hope you keep updating because I'm reallly loving this story. On a ConCrit pov there weren't actually very many mistakes just a few typos. And nothing too glaringly obvious, so kudos. Anyway, I am defs looking forward to more. I'm too proud to beg for an update haha but just know you have one loyal fan.

OOOOH i remember. I gotta say I loathe faghags in stories usually but I did enjoy Joss. She wasn't too pushy/anoxious. Yep. Thats it.

I apologize for typos, I'm on my phone atm and My keyboards a pita.

Love,
YfKme
person js
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Haha, I loved the end to the chapter.