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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Patrick- to find out James is his one night stand - at a formal party- snicker
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, about halfway through the chapter when you were talking about Joss' family and her brothers, when you mentioned James of course I thought, hmmmm, how many James' could there be? hahah, I know: lots! But I still figured they were one and the same: James the brother and James the one-night stand. Of course James knew exactly who Patrick was! And good for him, he didn't even tell his sister! lol
Can't wait to see what happens next! lol
Can't wait to see what happens next! lol
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and I forgot to mention: I think Jocelyn is such a beautiful name. I would have never thought Joss came from Jocelyn! :)
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the humor in the story. Good first few chapters. Keep on writing, this is going to be a great story
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god...my head imploded. I swear it. I love you so bloody much; honestly. Please update as soon as you can, I can't believe how much I adore your characters.
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AAAHHH!! UPDATE!! this is such a good story!!! definitely not put off by ANYTHING!! i really like the characters (well...not joss's mom...) and how they all fit together!! I can't wait for this to update again!! Thanks, luv ya!
~hitachiintwinlover
~hitachiintwinlover
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Not too much information - just think about your summary :)
-I was waiting for this moment, great story1
-I was waiting for this moment, great story1
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June 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
MOOOORRREEEEEEE lol love it! the phone call at the end had me cracking up!
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June 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Not bad! I'll admit I had giggle fits seeing you used Spongebob's theme song. LOL
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June 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
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Should you, the author use extensive quotations and references, footnoting would be best in that for instance.
Thank you for your cooperation.