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June 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
you recommended reading list made me laugh
it totally fits your style...
it totally fits your style...
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June 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is wonderful! I hope you can update again very soon! :D
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June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
definitely no putting off, great chapter, cant wait to read the next chapter :)
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June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I thought the chapter was great. You did a good job of giving backstory without giving too much at one time. It worked well for me. I love the way that Patrick meets james again. I am picky about my stuff and I would also have been calling to get my sweater back. I bet that James also recognized Patrick when they had their one night stand.
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June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's not too much information at all. I love it and can't wait to hear the conversation with James. I'm enjoying your story a lot.
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Its a great chapter, very entertaining so don't worry about its feel, it feels great :)
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The resulting explosion is going to be EPIC, I can just tell. I can't wait :D
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Just as a note though, chap 3 says "at the age of twenty-six", while chap 1 implies that he's twenty-two... Continuity, or am I just really easily confused?
Just as a note though, chap 3 says "at the age of twenty-six", while chap 1 implies that he's twenty-two... Continuity, or am I just really easily confused?
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love, love, love it!!! I can't wait for the next chapter already!!! Also being English and addicted to tea? You sound right up my alley already =)
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So funny once more ! James is going to torture him slowly and with pleasure !!
Can't wait for more !! And to see the mother's reaction...
Can't wait for more !! And to see the mother's reaction...