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for Tear Down The Sky

by CarnivalOfRust

person RitsuO3O
schedule August 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hope you find the time to continue this amazingness.
person Hollow
schedule September 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhh boy your in big trouble now patrick now we only have to wait and see if he can keep that promise
hahahahahahah this is great
person AllSpark
schedule August 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love your latest chapter as well as the whole story. I just can't wait to see what's going to happen next and dread the day when Joss gets to know the truth. Please keep up the good work :)
schedule July 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I adore this fic. Please keep it up! The developments are so interesting and the characters so deep!
schedule June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON. I LOVE THIS STORY!
schedule June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i am really starting to get into this story...i really cant wait for more, keep up the good work!!!
person nemo
schedule June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Muhahahahaha... .. one of the funniest stories I've ever read. I like the style and the conversation between Patrick and James. I especially love it when Patrick received the first phone call from James. that was hilarious! I'll be waiting for your update soon :D
person Lisa
schedule June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, for someone who's working twelve hour days; you sure can write riveting chapters! lol

This was a great chapter; we see that James is more than just a pretty face; he actually has a decent personality.

I know Joss is only looking out for her bff, but maybe her brother has changed his ways. It seems like he's interested in seeing Patrick again. I was actually surprised the condition he didn't tell his sister would be a date. Maybe that'll come when he goes to get his sweater.

Anyway, great chapter; looking forward to more! :)
person bcsaturdai
schedule June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I must admit that the summary of the story made me pass by it a few times. Luckily, curiosity got the best of me and I decided to give your story a chance. Now I know what I have been missing. So far all the chapters have been funny and I kind of feel bad for Patrick. It seems he likes his best friend's brother, even from their school days. I anticipate the next chapter.
person papu
schedule June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You know, I watched the music video called Carnival of Rust but I didn't care for it. Thanks for the chapter, I'm watching for more. More angst!!!