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May 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sam; it seems he sold his soul to the devil Anders. Wonder why Jack's all of a sudden being nice to him?
Well, at least Frank gets to keep all his limbs!
Hahah, loved the part where Sam wanted to take Frank's place and thought he could buy Velcro sneakers! Hahah, too funny! =)
Well, at least Frank gets to keep all his limbs!
Hahah, loved the part where Sam wanted to take Frank's place and thought he could buy Velcro sneakers! Hahah, too funny! =)
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May 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well that's one hell of a head screw. Damn, i hope his brother cares cause if he comes out of this and his bro is still screwing up his life, I'd pound said bro like a tent peg. It's only going to get worse from here isn't it cause I'm betting, even if the money is all paid back, he's not going to let his new toy go so easily.
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May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like Jack, since he is already checking him out I am putting my bets on him being the intended partner eventually.
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May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah poor Sam! How's he gonna get himself outta this mess? lol
Is Allison Sam's girlfriend?
Looking forward to more! :)
Is Allison Sam's girlfriend?
Looking forward to more! :)
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May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
definitely like it :D Immediately I got a lovely inner voice going on while reading and I cannot wait to read more! very edgy!
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May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
woah, b day from hell on the way? i think so!
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May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I'm hooked! Sounds like a great story. Can't wait for more! :)
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May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far :D I really look forward to reading more of this story so please update again soon! Oh, is it possible to get your livejournal account because I would like to read some of your other stories
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May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ut oh, this bodes exptremely bad things! So bro stole and now he's gotta pay? So, totally SUCKS to be him, huh.
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May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm interested in seeing where this goes. You did a good job with establishing some of the characters. I think I'll like Sam as a protagonist. Jack seems like he'll be important and I'm quite intrigued by him. I can't wait to see where this goes and what will happen.