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for Bitter Chocolate Kiss

by ReleaseYourMonster

person Jetfire
schedule June 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I must have missed this in my endless search for good fiction, or I was up in the skies when you posted the first time, anyway I really like it and can't wait for the next chapter.

Love Ion, sexy men so hard to come by :-). Please carry on with the awesomeness.

Hugs Aduial
schedule June 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
eh?! copply plaza? i was there on tuesday with my senior class for a blue man group concert. had lunch in the prudential food court. it helps that anime boston is also in the prudential, so i knew what food they had. persnally i like sakku japan. their japanese food is sooooo good!!! then they also have a ben and jerry's there too^.^ anyway, awesome chapter!!! poor james. did he have to throw his voiced to make himself sound like a girl? oh, random thought, is 'ion' pronounced with a hard i or a soft one? just curious cuz they both sound different. wait... if he is 16, then wouldnt he only have two years of high school? unless he is going to be in high school when he is 19... cuz i am currently a senior (graduating tomorrow^.^) and i am 18... but you said that he is 16 and going to have to go throughthree years of school, so it confused me a bit... anyway i truly love your story so far, keep up the good work!~
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schedule May 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i think james is cute :3 i really like your ideas so far and im looking forward to the next chapter. PLS UPDATE FAST! Cause i cant wait to know how james is going to look like as a girl! i love your story ^^
person saminada
schedule May 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So far your story is really great!

I just LOVE the way you write! LOL

It's all just so fun to read! ^^

Thanks alot for the story!
person Oni
schedule May 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love that scenario. That is a very intriguing summary. Write about 5 chapters and I will be more than happy to read. I get too disappointed reading the first chapter, only to have the author never continue the story. Thus, the strange policy. But already it sounds like it will be well worth reading. Have fun with it!
schedule May 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, wow, James's mom is a piece of work, huh? Good for her acting skills, now she got James to do exactly what she wanted! :)

I'm looking forward to James turning into who? What will his female name be? lol

Good chapter! Looking forward to more! :)