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yay~ rapid fire~ lol^.^ i kinda want to laugh at them for how easily they are fooled^.^ well, atleast james is gay and not strait, if he were strait that would have made this whole experience a heck of a lot worse than it actually is. haha a thought just occured to me, james can turn guys gay for him~ anyway, I LOVED THE NEW CHAPTER~~~~ your characters are sooooo well done>.< definatly an awesome reading experience. and i actually have a few friends who are like that, they are all girls though... hmmmmm.... *shrugs* oh well, they are all really good friends, so... anyway, characters should realise that the puppy eyes dont often work against the author... what the author wants, the author makes happen, and they are just along for the ride^.^ hehe~ james's appitite reminds me a bit of allen walkers appitite in D.Gray Man. such a good series, i remember once i was talking with a friend about something having to do with the innocence weapons in the series, problem was we were walking out of a movie theater and passed some other kids. i am prety sure they took it completly out of context cuz they started laughing avter we passed... anyway, getting off topic. poor james, i dont often ever wear high heels so i feel bad for himthat his aunt forces him to wear them... granted since i am going to try and get a cosplay of namine ritsu done for anime boston next year, so i am gunna have to get used to walking in heels cuz his boots have atleast a 2 inch heel on them. (for the record, ritsu is a boy who if i remember correctly is six years old, crossdresses as a girl, and his boobs are missles. he is rather amusing and his costume is gorgeous~) picture ->http://utau.wikia.com/wiki/File:Ritsu_official_syusei.jpg i also didnt find any pictures of cosplayers for him, sooooo... anyway, still really off topic. so were the three girls at lunch popular girls? if so are they out to help or hinder him? just kinda curious~ i fould the ringtone he has for his dad to be amusing^.^ such a funny song~ anyway, i cant wait for the next chapter~~~

have a good day~~

I LOVE that George of the Jungle song! lol

I can't wait until Ion sees James/Isabella for the first time tomorrow in school! Well, not really TOMORROW, but in the next update it'll be "tomorrow"! lol

I think he's gonna have stiff (pardon the pun, heheh) competition w/William, who btw I really like. He seems like such a sweet kid. And who knows? James/Izzy may go for James and not the man-whore Ion....

Can't wait for the next chapter; great job with this one!!! :)

i am really starting to get into this story and i really cant wait for more.... keep up the good work!!! :)

La historia esta genial *0*
Me encanto, ya estoy impaciente por leer el siguiente capitulo ^0^

Was "Felix" the guy that was sitting with Ion in the mall? If so, you switched their names. The guy with Ion in the mall was named "Asher." It's just a little confusing, since a Felix wasn't mentioned in the previous chapter. Other than that, things are going great! Pretty good character developement (the aunt seems more like a high school kid than an aunt, but we all have at least one of those in our family XD) and not many grammar mistakes save for the occasional random word that looks like you were about to say something, then backspaced and worded it another way. No worries, though. Keep it coming! We'll be waiting.

Omg, so Felix was the guy in the mall with Ion? I wonder why Ion hung up; he's probably making a mad dash towards his friend as we speak, hahah. Can't wait till they meet again! Although William sounds pretty dreamy too....ooohhh, maybe a three-way! Hahah, yeah I know, getting wayyyyy ahead of myself here; as it is, they all think James is a girl! lol

Great job! :)

hmmm, i didnt know about the voice thing. i have a friend who is transgendered he (was a she, is now a he and has been for all four years of hs, perhaps even a little bit before) is a very interesting person^.^ i have actually known him since second grade( of my current friends he is the one i have known the longest) anyway, aweesome chapter~ i really wish i could meet james, it could be a really interesting experience~ and he seems like an amusing person to hang out with. have u been to anime boston before? it is definitally an amazing experience^.^ so many people, and it is almost as if everyone (in cosplay mostly) is a friend~ and some of the costumes are amazing too~. thanks for the pronunciation correction, it really helped a lot. the only thing i can say about graduation weekend was that i went to bed at midnight that saturday, and didnt wake up untill noon the next day. i think that is the longest i have slept without waking up in a long time!! it was definitally fun though~ i must agree about the food thing too, as long as it tasts good, what should it matter what it is~ well, i dont really eat fish, tuna and shrimp are ok on occasion, but other than that i havent really found a type of fish that i actually like... anyway, poor, poor crossing james *smirks* he must hate having to wear a dress, i dont much like wearing dresses unless it is a special ocasion, and to be dragged into victoria's secret? that must have seemes like hell on earth to him. but it makes for some great amusement, so he will have to deal. and felix, he sounds sooo awesome!!! definatly sounds like an interesting person to talk to. as before, i completly loved the new chapter and cant wait for the next one~ ....wow, this got kinda long... hmmmm, james' graduating age is pratically the opposite of another of my friends, she as 17 when she graduated with us this year. good friend too~ did james get held back? that would make sense, or is it that the girl he is spying on is in that grade, and so, to be closser to her, he went into a different grade so that he could be better able to watch her. if that makes any sense.... either way, i eagerly await the next chapter, Keep up the good work~~~^.^~~~

Awesome....school full off hot men! lock me in it...lol...anywho...love it, can't wait for the drama to unfold either.
Thankfully my one transgender story...I did no research except watching anime, and since it took its idea from that it didn't have to realistic with the voices just automatically being perfect...lol. Yeah my little world everything just falls into place. I should probably get to writing again...but my beta's gone off to Japan....anyway we're discussing your story which is just very cool, and I love James, poor guy, Can I have a wish for another shopping trip, perhaps with a changing room run in with one of the hot guys?...
Or perhaps introducing some stockings and suspenders to James?
*insert evil laugh*
Carry on with the awesomeness
Hugs Aduial

I've decided to take a more hate mail stance on some things that trip me up while reading stories.

With 37,510 dollars, you could barely get a bargain Mercedes, and definitely not a any type of Ferrari since they run anywhere from upwards of 200,000 all the way to a million dollars. It would actually take four years for them to spend the money that it takes to buy a really good car with that yearly tuition. The school costs less than state college. An impressive amount of money for someone to cough out, but not Earth-shattering, not "so much money".

On the other hand, I love this story. I wouldn't mention it if I didn't care for the integrity of the story, and hope that you don't have a character that's too caught up in the gilding. It's hard not to put the things that you secretly value into the story and you're probably stressing about college fees. Keep up the good work. XDDDDD

Omg, that video! Wow! And so amazing that it was narrated by a guy! He WAS a guy, right? lol

And I didn't know these boys go thru so much trouble to get boobs! He looked better than a lot of girls I see! hahah

So James, aka, Isabella (pretty name btw) finds a hot guy Ion, pronounced how? Eye-on, or like Ian? But Ion thinks he's a chick; that will be a challenge keeping up the pretense of being a girl, should they ever meet again! lol

Have a most awesome time at your relative's wedding! :)