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Hello, I just discovered this story and I totally love it. I love gender-bender story when the guy dresses up as a girl and this story totally fits my taste. I like James' personality and the two hot guys are sure interesting. I'm more rooting for Will than Ion. It's not that I don't like Ion, I like how he is smitten by James but it seems that Will would be better for James. I mean, he didn't make a fuss in front of everyone when he discovered James' true identity. Now that he knows his true identity, I'm sure Will will be able to accept James as he is. I hope we'll get a new chapter soon. Please, don't make me wait too long for the new chapter

Firstly, happy belated birthday! Secondly its good, but don't change points of view so often, it gets rather confusing. But still really really really love it and can't wait to see how long James' selfrestraint will hold...because I doubt he has any really :).

I love the way you've kept Ion in character, even with the insulting to get to know "Isabella". It would have been weird if he'd acted like Will. I'd def go for an Audi, if he's really rich give him an R8 its an amazing car.

Thanks so enrollment :) To keep you up to date, I am now up to 5 chapters of my new story. Going to write it completely first and then start posting, because work keeps me busy at random times. Can't wait for more!!!!

Huggins
Aduial

Happy Birthday! I hope you have an awesome time at your "surprise" party! :)

Great chapter! And omg, I can't believe what a prick Ion was! He was so nasty to James/Isabella! That green-eyed monster reared its ugly head when Ion saw "his girl" talking to Keith. Can't wait to see what happens when he sees her walking with Prince William! :)

And Asher and Felix are fraternal twins? Hmmmmmm Before AFF I would have been mortified at this, but since AFF has totally corrupted me, now I say, "C'est la vie!" (I hope I spelled that right!)

I'm super happy with your update.
I couldn't wait for the confrontation between Ion and James/Isabella and I got it all right!
Though, I was seriously surprised by Ion's behaviour. I thought him more mature but in the end he seems not that different from an elementary schooler who would pick on a girl who caught his fancy. With his hot-headness and possessiveness there are going to be flames flying all around when he pick up on Will's interest in 'his' bitch...
And one more thing - I'm finding myself liking more and more Susan - she is one wicked, kick-ass aunt and does whatever she wants, both to her hubby and James. I love her antics;)

so awesome!!!! i find it amusing that the font changed from when i first clicked on this to when i had to reastart my cp and reopen it... anyway~ have fun at your b-day party and HAPPY BIRTHDAY~~ loved the new chapter~ i gotta wonder what will and ion will do when they find out that james is a boy and not a girl as they thought. definatly gunna be funny! i just hope that they dont hurt him when they do find out... but it's their fault for falling for him in the first place. anyway, change of plans for AB this year. was asked to participate in group cosplays for both black blood brothers (as mimiko) and black cat (as kyoko) and will probably (if i go for all three days) be latvia for one of the days too (cuz my grandfather came from latvia and so i wanted to cosplay him for a day...) so i might try to make the ritsu cosplay for some time in the furure, but just not for this con... sadly. it would have been fun, but i dont plan on giving up on the idea~ anyway, again i love the chapter~ cant wait to read more!!

I was really shocked by how James ignored Ion to take a look at his friends and the lovers being twins made my jaw drop by the way. But back to the Ion vs James thing. I did not expect them to bark at and stomp each other, literally, it was at first confusing and then interesting. I would have disagreed with it if you hadn't cleared up my confusion later when Ion explained that he was lashing out at James. My jaw dropped when I saw him say she wasn't that all hot and I was about to yell "Bull shit!" but decided not to terify my mother. And it was bothering me but it all makes sense now so congrats on pulling it all together in the end.

Oh and I am loving James' little vouyer moment at the end. He is so cute sometimes. Speaking of cute I loved the facebook info. It adds to James' character and his relationship with his aunt. Sneaky woman ;3

More...more. I love the suspense of wanting Ion to finally see James at school. What will happen between Ion and William? Please update soon. ;)

Wipeeeee! Sooo cute, I hope Ion gets him, he's way better then William (just cause the bad boy image is hotter and so is a Motorbike compared to a Mercedes). If you want a guy in a hot guy it has to be a BMW, Mercedes are for old people or dick heads.
Anyway thanks so much lovely, I'm trial writing a new story, will see if anything comes of that, but perhaps there'll be something new, if I can find a beta or somat.

Anyway I am here with sending my application to redo High School :)

Huggins Aduial
PS sorry its shorter today but i loooooove loooove loooove it.

Another great chapter....already wanting more, keep up the great work!!! :)

I absolutely love this story. Can't wait for the meeting between Ion and James...
This has humongous potential! I have a feeling that the interactions between main characters are going to be truly delicious;)