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October 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
u did great~ dont kid ur self~ sorry about the lateness... i have been stuck in draco harry fandom land for a while, and i havent exactly been checking the original updates as often as i probably should... i was a bit confused at the end, though did james forget that will asked to talk to him after school? and what about chemestry. u said he was going to it next yet u suddenly go off on a tangent with carol. but other than that, i think this is awesome!!!
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October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1: Oh.My.God. This story is hilarious! Poor James. His family sounds so screwed up. I don't like how he talks to his mother, though (me being one) it made my hackles rise a bit. Then I have to take a deep breath and tell myself "it's just a story."...lol.
Well I love the premise. I'm looking forward to reading chapter 2.
Well I love the premise. I'm looking forward to reading chapter 2.
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October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 2: Very funny chapter! Ion sounds HOT! James obviously is in lust with him. I can't imagine what will happen when they meet again. How is he going to control his erections around him and other boys? lol.
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October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved the scene with Will/James! James vs. Queen bee should be fun.
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October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It was fun watching Will go from anger to understanding back to lust! Now he's in lust with a guy! lol
I'm glad he finally decided to "forgive" James/Isabella for her/his fraud! :)
Will Ion ever find out? Will Will confront James? I would love to see that!
Great job; can't wait till the next chapter! :)
I'm glad he finally decided to "forgive" James/Isabella for her/his fraud! :)
Will Ion ever find out? Will Will confront James? I would love to see that!
Great job; can't wait till the next chapter! :)
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September 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Will sounds like a sweetheart! Should be interesting to see how he interacts with James in female form. Hope Ion doesn't find out anytime soon-more interesting that way.
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September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hahah, so funny that Ion's whole family saw the pic he had of James/Isabella! lol
I cannot believe William found out about James! I was amazed! And to think: he would never have known if James' phone didn't start vibrating. lol
I'll be curious now to see if he can truly pretend he doesn't know anything. I wonder if he can keep up his act when he's around James. Hey, I wonder if he'll tip Ion off, lol, he already knows Ion wants a piece of her, err, him. haha
Great chapter; looking forward to more! :)
I cannot believe William found out about James! I was amazed! And to think: he would never have known if James' phone didn't start vibrating. lol
I'll be curious now to see if he can truly pretend he doesn't know anything. I wonder if he can keep up his act when he's around James. Hey, I wonder if he'll tip Ion off, lol, he already knows Ion wants a piece of her, err, him. haha
Great chapter; looking forward to more! :)
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September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update;)))
Firstly, I don't know if you have noticed but it seems to me that Ion is SUCH a drama queen (or maybe rather drama king???)haha...
Frankly speaking, he seems to be really... unstable in the field of handling his emotions when it comes to Bella. In real life I would be rather afraid of getting into a relationship with a guy like that since he looks like a potential abusive/obsessive boyfriend material. He has to learn how to deal with this anger/jelousy issues. Then again, it is cute how he acts like an elementary schoolboy having his first crush, heh. I hope we will see a different side of him soon.
On the other hand, I absolutely adore William who did not appeal to me in the beginning (I am not into princely characters much and usually cheer for the badboys). He is such a sweetheart (chocolates, yummy) but he also has the guts AND can control his actions. James was extremely lucky to have somebody like Will find out about his circumstances. He could have gotten bashed badly and the whole project would end up as a major catastrophe...
I must admit that I did not expect James to be found out this soon in the story but it was a great twist in the plot - good job.
Finally, I just wanted to point out that James' family is really cruel to have him go through such a "job". Especially his mother... the way she manipulated him into complying with their plans... playing on his feelings for her... She should not have done that, at least his father and brother were more honest in their actions.
Sooo, kudos for another drama filled chapter and I hope that your headache goes away FOREVER.
Firstly, I don't know if you have noticed but it seems to me that Ion is SUCH a drama queen (or maybe rather drama king???)haha...
Frankly speaking, he seems to be really... unstable in the field of handling his emotions when it comes to Bella. In real life I would be rather afraid of getting into a relationship with a guy like that since he looks like a potential abusive/obsessive boyfriend material. He has to learn how to deal with this anger/jelousy issues. Then again, it is cute how he acts like an elementary schoolboy having his first crush, heh. I hope we will see a different side of him soon.
On the other hand, I absolutely adore William who did not appeal to me in the beginning (I am not into princely characters much and usually cheer for the badboys). He is such a sweetheart (chocolates, yummy) but he also has the guts AND can control his actions. James was extremely lucky to have somebody like Will find out about his circumstances. He could have gotten bashed badly and the whole project would end up as a major catastrophe...
I must admit that I did not expect James to be found out this soon in the story but it was a great twist in the plot - good job.
Finally, I just wanted to point out that James' family is really cruel to have him go through such a "job". Especially his mother... the way she manipulated him into complying with their plans... playing on his feelings for her... She should not have done that, at least his father and brother were more honest in their actions.
Sooo, kudos for another drama filled chapter and I hope that your headache goes away FOREVER.
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September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I wanna fucking read the story cause i like it , but the FONT IS PISSING ME OFF MAN!!!!! Stick to the regular font im , not even going to waste my time trying to understand it.
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September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wrong ritsu :P sorry... i had been thinking of the utaloid ritsu namine... but i came to decision to try to cosplay him at a later date, cuz i was asked by a close friend to cosplay both kyoko kirisaki from black cat, and mimiko katsuragi from black blood brothers. i allready have most of kyoko's cosplay~ anyway, LOVED THE NEW CHAPTER!!!!!!! poor james. i cant help but wonder if will will use the info he found for blackmail... ^.^