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for Us Against the World

by Jayded

person kylee
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOL. Poor Donovyn has been dissed already. I hope he can bring himself to forgive Lexx. I am glad that Donovyn is also taking interest in his little brother. It must be strange for Lex to find out that he has so many siblings out there.
schedule June 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah, poor Lexx; he's just realizing his family's a little fucked up! lol Well, I guess it's better he caught them before things got really embarrassing! lol
person kylee
schedule June 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am kind of annoyed with Jared. They just took Lexx in and Jared is only concerned with his own selfish desires. He can't even be bothered to make his own little brother feel at home. How hard would it have been to move things to the bedroom? There is nothing worse than making someone feel like a third wheel. Kris should had behaved better than that.
schedule June 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, some girl here to see him! Lexx is a funny one; I know Vyn doesn't think so!

I love the way Jared tried to rationalize his incesteous relationship w/Kris! It's not incest b/c they're like the same person and their DNA is the same! Hahah, yeah, that won't fly.....

Great chapter; can't wait to read more about this wacky family! :)
schedule June 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Shit, I just noticed there's two Lisa's here.....never had that happen before! We're gonna have to start using the first initial of our last name or something. lol
person river girl
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Again, enjoyed this. These characters, the description,everything. Thanks!
schedule May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, brotherly love, lol! Hopefully Lexx won't catch them "eating dinner". lol
person luc
schedule May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ok.....like the story....althought feel like want to strangle gavin and gabriela to death.....hope everything going to be okay with the boys....please updated soon....
person kylee
schedule May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Talk about your non traditional family LOL. I imagine the poor Lexx is going to feel quite uncomfortable if he finds out that Kristian and Jared are so damn close. Very interesting family. A whole new lifestyle for Lexx. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
person kylee123
schedule May 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Lexx. What a messed up life he has lived so far. I am glad that Kristian is determined to help him. It is a lot for him to handle. I hope Gabrielle will cooperate and let lexx stay. I can see that it really will be the two of them against the world. Love the story.