rate_review Reviews

FINALLY YOU WROTE SOMETHING. :D I enjoyed it. It was very you, and I don't know how to explain that really, but it was. You have a particular writing style, I think, and the voice/tone was definitely yours doing the narration. xD I liked it, and the sex was good. The only part that I didn't particularly like was the ending (gasp!) onnnllyyyy because the You-character seems like a stuck-up bitch that's like "Dang, girl, let's do this again next time, yo." and just up and leaves the I-character not even a minute, it seems, after she's organismed (that was on purpose, btw). And I felt sad for the I-character at the last sentence; she sounded sad, did she not? But that adds more depth to the story, too, you know? :)

Thanks, ikkichi! I apologize for not staying up last night to read it, but it was a good thing to wake up to! ^^