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by ReleaseYourMonster

schedule September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This little story was awesome. You should really continue it!
person Yolandi
schedule May 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi I dont care what you do with this two I just want more J/T. I just love stories where the big bad ass jock comes out of the closset becaues he had fallen for the so obvious gay guy. Ps about how long wil it take to finsh your other story? I want to read it but I dont Like to read WIP unless the athure is good and update reguarly. This story was good but it is like you dint end it even if it is finsh. That is how I know we wil see more of J/T.
person Pupette
schedule May 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it! The plot was interesting and the way you described the smutty scene was hot!! They didn't end up together but somehow if they would have that would have spoiled the main idea.Well,I don't know if I'm making much sense hehe..but you should continue writing,maybe something with more chapters :D
person YACUMO
schedule May 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wooohoooo. Baby for being your first time ou rocked!!! loved it from beginning to end. You must continue writing fics. You are really good!
Update soon and continue this lovely piece.
Bye
person Beck
schedule May 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It was awesome :D Love it!
person Mstorm
schedule May 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it and wish you would cont. it please.
schedule May 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well that was hot! lol

Tavon and Jude do have chemistry; that's for sure!

Great PWP! :)