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I really like this story...update soon!

Wow, what a horrible discovery! I was actually surprised it was Caden, just from the way he acts with Peter. Caden certainly did not approach this the right way. But to attack Peter like that; that's horrible. How many times was he planning on doing that? He never thought he'd be caught?

I wonder what Peter's gonna do now? Is he going to report Caden? Call the cops? How can he prove it? You know Caden won't come clean....

And why does Peter do nothing all day? There are plenty of blind people out there that lead meaningful lives; they work, have families...Peter really needs to find something to occupy him during the day.

I'm glad the story's back! I'm looking forward to see what happens next. :)

Hey Riska,
I feel sad for Peter. He leads really a boring life. Well, at least he decided to change his routine by going to Park. I guess that's good. The longish chapter is an improvement that I saw. But, I was disappointed, because I wanted to see Caden. You can use a guide dog if you want. I mean I have seen visually impaired people venturing out with the help of a guide dog. This way Peter can actually meet people, and come out of his shell life. He seems like a lovely person. I would really like to see him meeting, and interacting with new people.

Keep up the good work!

I feel so bad for Peter. What a dull, monotonous (I hoped that's spelled right; I'm too lazy to check!) life he leads! There are blind people who can lead a fulfilling life. They have jobs and are pretty independent. Poor Peter; he doesn't have much excitement in his life.

This was a good chapter; at least he got to converse with some other people besides Susan. Thanks for making the chapter longer too! :)

Hey Riska,

I read the chapters you've so far uploaded, and I enjoyed them a lot.... Those who're physically challenged lead such a tough life compared to us, and they deserve more happiness, and love.... I am thrilled that you decided to pen down a story about one of a kind, and kudos to you for that.... Did you know that blind people are exceptionally talented in music fields? I've even come across a certain person who sings so damn well like a pro, but he is blind.... They're the bravest, and I am always speechless when they show their talents.... I've only one complaint though, please write longish chapters.... I absolutely agree with the fact that even though blind people look defenseless, they are extremely aware of their surroundings...

I don't know why, but a part of me says that it's Caden who attacked Peter.... Are Caden, and Peter gonna be an item?

Keep up the good work, and I am so, so, so inspired by your story that I also want to write a story where a protagonist is blind too....

Hey, hey, nice to know I'm still in the story! hahah

I know Peter's worried about Caden, but isn't Caden eighteen? And doesn't he live next door? Or across the street? I was confused why Peter thought Caden didn't make it home b/c I thought they lived next door.

Anyway....I'm hoping Caden doesn't turn out to be Peter's rapist. I wonder how he'd talk himself out of that one.

Looking forward to the next chapter! You've got me on pins and needles here! lol :)

Interestin, engaging n very sensual. . When peter was eating his sandwich i almost thought the intruder was there!!!! Wlell done, kitty wantsmore！

I enjoyed it and i'm glad i clicked on your story. on pins and needles waiting.

I read this a few times and i find that i really like this please update soon

Wow, your writing is amazing!

So first I thought it was Caden who attacked Peter. And now I'm so curious: who's Caden to Peter? If Caden is eighteen (going to college, as was mentioned), and Peter is middle-age, what could they possibly have in common? Peter is Caden's parent's age, right?

Anyway, can't wait for more! Great job! :)