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for You are Mine

by Talana

schedule May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
meanie... still, the whole 'what was promised me' thing is intrieguing. How pissed would you be if you ended up vamp bait cause of something an ancester or ancester master or some such promised.
Glad you're not planning on making him to girly. i reckon if the vamp wanted a chick he woulda gone after one.
person MissMiki
schedule May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fair enough! also, it doesn't help that he sat on the poor kid this time ^^; kinda ruins the chance for him to run/be angry lol not chance for either. Joshua 2 Christian 0. :( I like how he's developing and I cannot wait to see what he decides to do with Christian! slave? companion? not-mate? haha XD The fact that he woke him up in his room kind of surprised me since that means he hadn't kidnapped him...yet. Ahhh, great update!! cannot wait to read more :)
person cruellamp
schedule May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loving this so far - I've never read anything with a similar plot which is unusual for a vamp fic. Points for originality!
schedule May 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
interesting... can't wait to see if the vamp is going after for a mate, munchies or something else and why it left him technicaly alive.
person RJaneyP
schedule May 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn annoying pushy Vamps... PROMPT:> for once let the tables be turned, let victem become the predator. Let the boy get the upper hand on Mr Vamp, and take him captive, torture and threaten to toast him with sunlight or actually using the point of sharp wooden stake, where the sun don't shine. Remember monsters don't always have fangs, but they can still bite back.< End of Prompt! GRRR G
person MissMiki
schedule May 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well that was exciting!! I cannot wait to read more :) also, I love your "prompt" idea! haha sounds like fun :) I don't have one right now, but good luck!
person MissMiki
schedule May 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ack, that sounds absolutely miserable :( if the vampire ever shows up again, i'd probably chew him out before fear set in just because I *hate* feeling sick...ew