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for You are Mine

by Talana

schedule August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes! a good vampire story at last. i love how the vampire is so mysterious and scary, adds a kick of adrenaline to everything. we can feel Christians fear :) please update soon! hooked already :)
person Zangah
schedule May 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a really intrigueing story so far! I can't wait for the next update.
person Roriette
schedule May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
rofl Even I've heard of Laurell K. Hamilton. Or something.
This seems fairly interesting. That vampie sure is hot. I can't wait for the smexxx 8D
schedule May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope nothing happens to Laura or Christian's parents. I still can't figure out whether Joshua is going to steal Christian away and make him his blood/sex slave or continue to stalk/hunt him. Please update soon and hopefully with another 'visit' from, our wonderful vampire friend, Joshua.
schedule May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this! Keeps getting more and more interesting!
schedule May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh he's soooooo not going to like this... and being logical is going to get him into a crap ton of trouble. I just hope the vampy doesn;t kill everyoone. I think that would break him.
person Avernion
schedule May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It sucked... When there were no more chapters :-D I cant wait to find out what'll happen next :3 Great job with this story C:
person Narukyuu
schedule May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
At first I wasn't very thrilled to start reading a story about vampires since all the "publicity" they got lately witch I find repulsive and annoying, but it's good to know there are still quality stories about those creatures.

I absolutely adore Laura, she is a wonderful character. :)
I found christian a bit too submissive in the last chapter, It might be expected from the situation, but I kind of wanted to see him fight a bit more.

Besides that - very good story, very realistic reactions of the characters to the situation and your writing is also great. I'd love to continue reading this and soon. :)
schedule May 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad I decided to read this today. It is very good and intriguing. Obviously Joshua wants Christian as a bed partner but right now I'm wondering if Joshua is prepping Christian for his bed. I'm thinking he's going to spend his nights in Christian's bedroom if not in his bed. Also I want to know who promised Christian to Joshua. I think it might have been his father or/and mother but it could have been an ancestor for generations ago.

Please update soon!!
person luc
schedule May 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this story great i love it....continue please......
can u inform me if u update it? luctsubasa@yahoo.co.id
thanks....