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No, it can't be over yet! I just got sucked in and I can't stop reading now!!! Please come back!!!

OMG I LOVE THIS! You have done such an amazing job. I feel so bad for Christian but at the same time i want to see more of him and Joshua. lol. Can't wait to read more. :)

Thought I reviewed this chapter already. Clearly I haven't. All I can say is...damn Joshua. So serious. "Here are her eyeballs! She won't be using them to ogle you ever again, Christian. Now, what was that about conspiring with hunters? You'll never do it again? Nice to know we've come to an agreement."

And yet I can't help but want to know more about Joshua, more importantly why Christian's his target, and why he's so possessive of him.

The suspense is killing me! So much I want to know!

Oh that was an awesome chapter. I did notice that authors on this site usually update only once a month, once a week if they are talented. I feel bad about commenting on it- but anyway, is there a chance for the chapters to be longer than they are now? I don't mind waiting for a long time as long as the new update is 'full'. Hope I don't sound too rude. I love this story and eagerly wait to read part 2.

I'm curious as to why he thinks he belongs to him. something had to have brought this attention on.

Cristian'll never forgive himself if Joshua really offs Amelia. I hope she's prepared to face him. What I want to know is why Joshua choose Cristian in the first place. Is it the boy's lack of faith? His family line? His type of blood? Some other reason?

I don't see Joshua being the type to be this meticulous over a human without the right motive. Whenever Cristian asks him as much, Joshua keeps giving him a cop-out, to boot. Not knowing just freaks him out even more, which makes me believe that Joshua enjoys playing with him...that and the keeps way he speaks makes me wonder just how old he is as a vampire.

Ohhhh my, I really hope you plan to update that story because I don't think I can handle my heart being broken if you don't! Its starting to get so very interesting. Your characters are awesome and I really like your writing style. Please do continue with the great job you are doing here!

I haven't finished to the most recent chapter yet but you asked for prompts so here is one that is a little more then that I got this idea after Josh had said he was promised.... "Robert Frosts" POEM "Stopping by Woods On A Snowy Evening" The whole poem is a prompt since it's cold and winter is on it's way? I'll read the rest and see what you think I've got many pages to read before I can sleep......

What a great chapter! The ineractions between Joshua and Christian so good. I wonder if Joshua will come to think of Christian as other than a food source or if he has something planned.