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for Cryptozoology

by Hoopyloop

person hot4ivy
schedule January 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

This is a surprisingly enjoyable tentacle rape story. It shows that no premise is too bizarre if you can write well.

I loved some of the descriptions, e.g.: “Her jaws were forced open wide, the thing was slightly soft but otherwise unyielding, like an overly ambitious mouthful of steak.”

schedule December 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
the way you write is amazing!!! i look forward to another chapter :)
person Recal
schedule December 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Haha Boris is a playa', he gets as many girls as he likes. I can't help but think of his as a somewhat sweet monster that has a sexual directive. He never seems to want to hurt anyone, unless he's been hurt first.
person Linz
schedule December 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story, happy to see an update, keep it up and update soon please.
person SkySan27
schedule December 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Gosh. I thought this had been forgotten about. Nice to see a new chapter, and nice to see a very beautiful chapter. Tentacle rape with mass numbers is always quite amusing in its own kinky fashion.

Looking forward to see where you're going with this and where it will end up, so keep up the good work.
person Faesy
schedule November 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like it. More please. Loving how it has a plot and smut. Not usually into tentacles but I like how you're writing it. Keep up the good work and keep writing!
person j3551c4t
schedule August 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Why haven't more people read this? This is amazing!!!! Best tentacle with plot story I have ever come across. Well, probably the only one, but this manages to be sexy and interesting at the same time. Love it!!
person Recal
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Compelling as always Hoop :) Glad to see you're updating!
person Anon
schedule July 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I would love it if you continued this. I remember reading it well over a year ago and being very interested in it then. I've been looking for a good tentacle story and this one is great. Of course all up to you to continue it or not, just letting you know that I enjoyed it a lot.
person sabaku lotus from aff.net
schedule July 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Never thought to read this on this site.

It's weird.....and interesting and creepy at the same time.