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September 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Woah, how this story hasn't had many reviews, I have absolutely no idea.
First off, this is a fantastic story; the narrative is wonderfully atmospheric and even I can actually see its how an elf would possibly look out to the world! The culture and establishments of the elves (and their religion) all knits together so well even in so short a time in the chapter. It's not often I encounter an author that can set the background so well and manage to match it to the pace with the events and characterisation. It's all done really really well! In addition, seeing how the hallucinations escalate, to the sheer brutality and loss felt by the characters, is also really realistically done. I feel terrible for Dini and anticipate what happens to her.
Still, I realise it has been a while since it's been updated. But still, even if the story doesn't finish, thanks for the post. I had a great read and I'm glad to have found it. :3
First off, this is a fantastic story; the narrative is wonderfully atmospheric and even I can actually see its how an elf would possibly look out to the world! The culture and establishments of the elves (and their religion) all knits together so well even in so short a time in the chapter. It's not often I encounter an author that can set the background so well and manage to match it to the pace with the events and characterisation. It's all done really really well! In addition, seeing how the hallucinations escalate, to the sheer brutality and loss felt by the characters, is also really realistically done. I feel terrible for Dini and anticipate what happens to her.
Still, I realise it has been a while since it's been updated. But still, even if the story doesn't finish, thanks for the post. I had a great read and I'm glad to have found it. :3
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May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I hope to see more soon.
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May 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It would be nice if you would update this story
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May 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking this story so far. It will be interesting to see where you take it.
One suggestion I would make would be to double space...it would make it easier to read.
Thanks for sharing!
One suggestion I would make would be to double space...it would make it easier to read.
Thanks for sharing!