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Hi! This is a really great start! I'm very curious to how this is going to develop and I havta admit I really like the character :P! The summary and the title was quite attention grabbing :) I'm really looking forward to reading more of this story! Good luck! :)

Your character is much worse than just unholy bastard [ususally I love complicated manipulating bastards], beside they are fun to write. Your malevalient character is cold hearted soul stealing Demon beast, who takes their love and uses it to feed on their souls and then glories in their distruction when he tires of them. Congratulation for creating such a horrible monster, that doesn't actually need fangs to be one, just the lack of heart and any normal righteous emotions. A Creative interesting experiment, but I hope and pray for your sake you're not anything like him in real life... for that would be simply pathetic!

This is not critism or flames, merely an observation, and I look forward to reading more of this story and seeing, what you do with your human monster next, that's not to say I wouldn't enjoy seeing him get back a pieace of his own action, and get knocked on his heartless ass! G

I dig this so far. Hope you update soon.