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by yukisan

person JayDee
schedule May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Now, that's a nice bit of rubbing... maybe just an unpleasant hint beneath that this man isn't happy to take No as an answer? He seems maybe a little entitled just to expect a date... I could be mis-reading his character though! You did manage to fit quite a bit of information into less'n 450 words which is pretty impressive.
person Anon
schedule May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is such a vivid glimpse into their lives, and there's a great deal of emotional impact in this piece. Short as it is, the characters come across as very human and very real. Lovely!
schedule April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, I like this! certainly a different take on Embrocation, one I had thought of doing myself. really nice though

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