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May 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ooooh, I think I'm going to really enjoy reading this! ^^
Patrick is adorable and so geeky, but adorable all the same. Ahaha!
Lars seems to be love-struck by this boy, and it's honestly so cute!
Really love the unique concept, so update soon please! :D
Patrick is adorable and so geeky, but adorable all the same. Ahaha!
Lars seems to be love-struck by this boy, and it's honestly so cute!
Really love the unique concept, so update soon please! :D
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May 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg, this is such an awesome story! I just finished the last chapter and I'm hooked! Poor Patrick; he's gonna hyperventilate! lol
I can't wait to see what happens next! :) Great job!
I can't wait to see what happens next! :) Great job!
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May 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww. :3
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May 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw, this chapter was the purfect sort of sweet for me. And funny too. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter :3
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May 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh Jenn I love the follow up to the first prompt. I think I just fell in love with Patrick. Like seriously. I'm not sure he could get much more adorable! And the writing just flowed. I didn't even blink as I read it. Just gorgeous. (chey_d from slash pile here btw). Weird the review cut off >8( trying again.
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May 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am loving Patrick, like so much. “You’d recognize me, ‘cause I’d be the guy knocking over displays and making people uncomfortable, and stuff.” Self-depreciating awkward comic nerd? Don’t mind if I do. Om nom nom.
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May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
MOARPLS?!?!?
*Cough* >__>
A series of one-shots would be amazing. Poor Patrick, indeed! I really liked the style of your story, it was very effective. Would love to read more about these characters, regardless of style.
*Cough* >__>
A series of one-shots would be amazing. Poor Patrick, indeed! I really liked the style of your story, it was very effective. Would love to read more about these characters, regardless of style.
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May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liked the set up. And I’m totally hooked into the characters lives in the little bits of you’ve fed us so far. Very smooth, almost space prose that were fun to read. And now I really really want to know what happens next and would love to read more.
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May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Uuuuuhhhh... Like the direction this story took... Nice, intriguing and smooth! Well done... More?!
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April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love hearing peoples messages. Nice touch there. So far, the story sounds interesting. I'm looking forward to read the rest :-)